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Slackr
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2021-12-19 04:58

Love the story so far. I am looking forward to how it develops and based on how things have been set up so far it should be extremely enjoyable. Do yourself a favor and give this story a shot, I am expecting it to turn into a very popular story!

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Yolohy
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Thanks a lot for the review and all the support and encouragement!

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Tuluz
TuluzLv15

Honestly the best VR novel I have read, and I have read a lot of these. Some key things I’d like to point at that are done well. -The MC uses the knowledge from his reincarnation logically One of the big things that grates on me in other reincarnation novels is the MC not capitalizing on knowing the future markets to make money since it just isn’t logical. This novel on the other hand does a great job. Another great point is how power scaling is done in this novel. Typically novels in this genre will have the MC gaining insane advantages but still having trouble and barley scraping by against a bunch of players. Authors do things like stalling the characters growth or making endless enemies at slightly lower levels, however in this novel the MC faces logical challenges and setbacks. There are no cliche one dimensional characters that just serve to further the word count. The author does a great job making the challenges logical, higher level NPCs, people searching for his location, and a very intricate plot. Probably the best thing about this novel however is the lack of plot holes. I don’t know how the author does it but with a constantly entertaining plot and nothing contradicting 10/10. I will complain however :( the chapters are too short. I’m currently all caught up with privlage chapters at 221 but waiting a week for ~13 chapters and then finishing them in a bit over an hour makes me sad. If you read this review please add a few hundred more words per chapter :) :) :) or maybe even double the length lol :) :)

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