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William_Tichenor
William_TichenorLv112yr
2022-03-17 02:14

This review is after climbing to the most recent updated chapters around 260+. I'm loving a lot of the ideas presented in this novel. I started reading this novel because it was expressed that the things in the game change how you are in the real world. Now after reading 260+ chapters nothing, nothing has changed with him or others playing in the real world. I started reading this because of this premise and it seems like I have been let down because almost every chapter they talk about the upcoming apocalypse and people using their powers out of game, but they always talk about it in the future tense. Like honestly I don't know how much longer I can continue reading without something of note changing because otherwise this is just another regression vrmmo and I have read too many already. Author If you read this could you shed some light on this issue?

Re: Evolution Online

Yolohy
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1383 Chs

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Yolohy
YolohyAuthor

Volume 3 will involve real world things.

2yr
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Mr_Rapopo
Mr_RapopoLv1

in my opinion, that is better because we know that the novel will have many chapter upcoming and this novel is more realistic, if the chapter still at 200 but the story is too fast that will make this novel look boring

2yr
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luksin
luksinLv1

I hope the author doesn't rush the ending soon after connecting both reality and game.

Mr_Rapopo:in my opinion, that is better because we know that the novel will have many chapter upcoming and this novel is more realistic, if the chapter still at 200 but the story is too fast that will make this novel look boring
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