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Kiyoung
KiyoungLv43yr
2021-11-07 00:29

I've read a lot of HP fanfics. But this one has got all the things which others lacked. The ML is OP with bloodline, but has to work hard regarding magic and all. The relationships are really good, well can't expect more when the ML is just 12-13. The Harem is also coming along smoothly. I suggest this novel to people who like HP and also like romance.

HP: The Secret Heir.

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