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HP: The Secret Heir.

confused4you

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What is HP: The Secret Heir.

Read HP: The Secret Heir. fanfiction written by the author confused4you on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Movies fanfic stories, covering romance, action, adventure, harem, harrypotter. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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I get transported into the world of Harry Potter I am going to become the most powerful and influential wizard of the time.

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Lamafdg
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Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv3Dao_of_Melancholy

Top notch premise with a unique main character. Can’t say much more without spoiling the small surprise. But great fanfic 10/10 would recommend

M2skMan
M2skManLv1M2skMan

The novel is very well written and didn't saw any incorect words or grammar, The story develop fast but in a good way. All I want to say is just read it and you won't regret.

Airelda
AireldaLv4Airelda

It's not that the story is bad. The problem lies in the fact that there are no facts. The first 2 chapters are a whole lot of PLOT ARMOR. He needs money? Hey, there is someone running a dice game and he just happens to be carrying around 50K pounds for MC to win it... how convenient! Honestly, the whole thing hit me with a sense of disbelief. I believe the guy isn't dead but in a coma where he is having this unreal dream. If that is true, my rating should be higher but if not... this needs a redo. Funny enough, the grammar isn't that bad, just a few misspelled and wrong word choices here and there.

Laziness_IsThe_Key
Laziness_IsThe_KeyLv4Laziness_IsThe_Key

Idea was good but execution was poor First few chapters makes it clear it won't go far. Too much plot armour like Ownership of so many houses, an 11 year old kid made 50k by gambling and Its like reading a summary I did this and That and also too few words.

toocareful
toocarefulLv3toocareful

It's too rushed. There are tons of hp fanfic so if ur gonna make a hp fanfic you have to make sure you do it right and not just make into a template.

IAMTIRED
IAMTIREDLv1IAMTIRED

I have read other work from the author and it is very unique amongst other Fan-fic and I like it but there are some grammatical errors here and there but nothing major. The story progresses a bit fast and the character growth is a bit slow I hope that the Author could squeeze in more chapters. And could flesh out the character more.

arno_dorian
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Kaichen442
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Deisy_Marin
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I'm lovin 'it 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Razish
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Tv_Tv_7716
Tv_Tv_7716Lv1Tv_Tv_7716

I like the fan-fic it is very enjoyable if you suspend your disbelief and just enjoy where it is going if you just want a fun fan fic this is a good one.

DaoistofBookworms
DaoistofBookwormsLv3DaoistofBookworms

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striker45
striker45Lv6striker45

Writing is good. Mc is interesting to follow other characters needs to be fleshed out with more interaction. The world is explored more and can't wait to read more after 2nd year

Lord_Beliall
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NutAllinMyBut
NutAllinMyButLv1NutAllinMyBut

Saw the cover, cool drawing of Anor Londo in DS3. Instant five stars! ……………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………

TrafalgarLaws
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Kiyoung
KiyoungLv3Kiyoung

I've read a lot of HP fanfics. But this one has got all the things which others lacked. The ML is OP with bloodline, but has to work hard regarding magic and all. The relationships are really good, well can't expect more when the ML is just 12-13. The Harem is also coming along smoothly. I suggest this novel to people who like HP and also like romance.

Lucifer515
Lucifer515Lv4Lucifer515

Good novel . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .

Redex933
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