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AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv41yr
2023-07-16 17:37

Very good writing and story, i just couldn’t get past that part where the anticipated main female lead had a relationship with this npc and was getting all freaky and it turned out that that “npc” was infact another player and not only that he also cheated on her at the same time, after spending a lifetime together in game and having a family together that’s all it amounted to, sigh. It’s not for me imma have to drop this, it’s a shame because it’s actually pretty good, feels like an official novel, but that part is just bugging me constantly. Welp what are you gonna do, that’s life-I recommend this for anyone who could get past that drama I talked about before🤷‍♂️

Earth's IP Game Designer {BOOK I COMPLETED}

Moonwolf1235
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195 Chs

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Wait there’s ntr

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AspiringPedo
AspiringPedoLv4

I mean technically its not ntr since the female lead was not with the protagonist yet but if you read it there’s this whole situation where she lived her whole life with a dude and he turned out to be cheating on her the whole time. She found out about it by hearing the guy bragging to his friend about a “freak” he was with in the game world. of course she was heartbroken and then the protagonist started crushing on her so the obvious thing would be them getting together after a while. I just didn’t like all the unnecessary drama involved with that soni dropped it. The story is good though, if you can get past that part then you would probably enjoy it🥸

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