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Barnacleboy
BarnacleboyLv152yr
2022-06-20 21:25

The novel is quite good. Its a book about a dude getting reincarnated with all information about the ips he’s played, watched and read. There on a parallel earth called blue star that is light years in ahead in technology with a way to extend a humans lifespan using vr which goes through time 100 times faster. The problem tho is that the vr world all are the same as earth and have a lack of creativity. So with the world ticket his parents never used before there death. he creates a vr world that gets regular updates throughout the story. So far his world is a floating island that has a building in the center that leads to other worlds in his ‘multiverse’ that for rn include avatar ‘the four nations’ and for the more light hearted gamers ‘minecraft’. In the future we’ll probably get worlds like the marvel universe, Star Wars, naruto, dc, Harry Potter, one piece, dragon ball, etc. its a really good novel with a creative story that I’m looking forward to. The only issue I have is the fact that since some of the people on blue star see ai characters as humans since the technology is so advanced you cant tell the difference between the two, so I think it’s kinda messed up to reset a world every year or two. At least give the players the ability to continue living on that world if they live till the end with the ability to be the only traveler there. Other than that its a really great read i recomend. Its definitely a novel that deserves to be in the top 5

Earth's IP Game Designer {BOOK I COMPLETED}

Moonwolf1235
4.7
195 Chs

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Pikachu_1233
Pikachu_1233Lv4

Assassin creed??

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Knived
KnivedLv10

The entire story is a massive plothole. I got the feeling that the author just started writing without any kind of plan. Like they are throwing as much stuff at the wall and seeing what sticks. Very poor story quality

1yr
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Barnacleboy
BarnacleboyLv15

Your not wrong on the plot holes. But as far as I saw, the novel set a new trend on the platform. Many started tweaking this idea and making there own novel based on it. So, this author has my respect in regards to that. As for my review, I may have gased it up at the time, but it’s a fanfiction. Plot holes, bad writing habits, and cheezy dialogue are usually apart of the genre.

Knived:The entire story is a massive plothole. I got the feeling that the author just started writing without any kind of plan. Like they are throwing as much stuff at the wall and seeing what sticks. Very poor story quality
1yr
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akzhol04
akzhol04Lv1

Recommend these novels

Barnacleboy:Your not wrong on the plot holes. But as far as I saw, the novel set a new trend on the platform. Many started tweaking this idea and making there own novel based on it. So, this author has my respect in regards to that. As for my review, I may have gased it up at the time, but it’s a fanfiction. Plot holes, bad writing habits, and cheezy dialogue are usually apart of the genre.
1yr
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Edy_Lemus
Edy_LemusLv2

Y eso es todo No seguirás con esta historia

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MeepsNewGroove
MeepsNewGrooveLv4

In all honesty, this book is quit literally a diamond in the rough considering the fact that I had to scroll very far down to even find it, but enough about that. 1. Writing quality 5/5 : Literally 0 grammar mistakes (atleast I haven’t seen any). 2. World background 5/5: Author makes everything little detail of his story match up so that their is little to no plot holes. Story is so immersive that it starts to feel like you’re actually somehow apart of the story. 3. Story development 5/5: The story has started to develope smoothly giving you multple perspectives of MCs creations and doesn’t throw around useless “young master” arcs that aren’t ever needed. 4. Character design 5/5: Author makes sure to keep whatever character or background character they adds sticks to their personality and doesn’t suddenly switch up like most novels tend to do. Update stability 4.5/5: Author updates frequently and doesn’t drop out on you for 3 months and sticks to their update schedule. All in all, definitely recommend reading this if you want a simple, adventurous, and enjoyable read that isn’t all about MC becoming a murderous psycho, useless harem, forced plot/ romance, system slavery, and overly used yandere trends. Good work author 😁 P.S: This is my first ever real review so I hope it was decent.

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Moonwolf1235
Moonwolf1235Author

Shameless Author Here! Three chapters coming out today and more during the week. Give me some inspiration and stones! This will not be dropped or lack updates! The writing is bad but not as bad as those MTLs I know you all read :)

2yr
Anas_AsBEIY
Anas_AsBEIYLv1

قصة بمستوى عالي من الابداع وتتبع الحبكة وربط الشخصيات في بعض الاوقات اتمنى ان ينشئ قصة في واحدة فقط من العوالم التي يدخلها بشخصية واحدة فقط لقدم جمع عدة عوالم باسلوب مذهل الغموض في انتظار عالم جديد شي مذهل وفي نفس الوقت يجعلك تنتظر على اخر من الجمر

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PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

pretty good, unfortunately (for me) the first 1-60 chapters are all about Avatar (i hate avatar)

2yr
Awriter
AwriterLv4

This is probably one of the best "I transmigrated into another world and used [insert media] to become rich!" trope books. I have ever had the pleasure of reading bonus points on it not having a harem at least for the MC

2yr
TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

Got my hopes up in the beginning. Thought it was pretty good around chapter 6. Knew it was amazing in chapter 14 when I got chills reading it. Hope this never gets dropped.

2yr
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1

I don't know what to say, what a high work of art. good job writer-sama ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
ice_lord889
ice_lord889Lv1

Excellent, uses a unique concept, has an intelligent MC, and it's well thought out. The writing quality is great. Overall 10/10. It's an enjoyable read and I hope it keeps getting consistent releases.

2yr
Unsightly
UnsightlyLv3

Call me stupid if I didn't give my power stone. E Suajugsxugxsuhsxuh Sjsjzjzmammzmnnsjsjhshbsivsksuvhiajohshvsghsuhijzsusbysgsbs good good

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