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Anbu310
Anbu310Lv143yr
2022-01-24 01:37

It's not bad. The MC is a bit too passive but other than that, it's a good read . . . .

Primitive age of Xianxia (Honghuang style xianxia, Pseudo insert)

Christopher_who
4.4
2 Chs

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Hiro_uzumaki06
Hiro_uzumaki06Lv5

I don't know about others but I'm getting extremely irritated while reading this novel. The MC is too kind in my opinion that it's bothering the entire story and also illogical. Also the grammar needs to be improved. Overall, I can't come to read the story after 35 chapters because it's irritating. Better change his character to less annoying. The above is solely based on my opinion.

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Johan_Liebert_
Johan_Liebert_Lv2

I would first like to clarify one thing, and that is I don't know much about the chinese mythology and am not particularily interested in the honghuan genre, but still, I kinda like it. I have only read the furst 10 chaps so won't say much. Almost everything is fine but the only problem there is, is that the time skips are too ridiculous like 5,000 years or 10,000 just passing doing nothing really special and also the fact that the MC is exactly the same even after such a long time just dosen't fit well. But a good story, hope the author posts more frequently.

2yr
renato_varela
renato_varelaLv1

I truly enjoy reading novels with xianxia/xuanhuan elements, many people do in fact. Ironically, most people like these stories, because thousands of them feature an uncompromising tyrant as their MC, more often than not they are perverts, childish and petty, a brat basically. I heavily dislike bratty/spoiled people, and therefore any stories with a Chinese setting, with a non-brat MC, is worth a read for me.

2yr
kokimon
kokimonLv4

5 estrellas para el poderosisimo Pangu que abrio el cielo solo para morir despues :( dando asi paso a la era primitiva que donde se encuentra nuestra prrotagonista dios demonio del mar del este Dai Hun. exp

3yr
Professional_hater
Professional_haterLv4

Honestly I’m not good with reviews and stuff since I normally troll😂but this novel is really good yet it has so little views if your wondering if it’ like those young master cliches well it’s not one of those id advice you give it try cuz personally this story is great

3yr
EijiSeishuu
EijiSeishuuLv11

Tags Please........ .................................................................................................................................

3yr
Janune_Kilua
Janune_KiluaLv4

There is one thing i admire in you which is Honghuang concept in webnovel is so little that you can't even find one. as of now I've only seen yours only in webnovel so i hope you will continue. Thanks for the Experience

2yr
SwordLord55
SwordLord55Lv1

Pretty good 😊😊😊 🙏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😊🙏😊😊 XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP

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ShadowFlamePhoenix
ShadowFlamePhoenixLv14

Interesting .

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