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Hiro_uzumaki06
Hiro_uzumaki06Lv53yr
2021-10-11 01:38

I don't know about others but I'm getting extremely irritated while reading this novel. The MC is too kind in my opinion that it's bothering the entire story and also illogical. Also the grammar needs to be improved. Overall, I can't come to read the story after 35 chapters because it's irritating. Better change his character to less annoying. The above is solely based on my opinion.

Primitive age of Xianxia (Honghuang style xianxia, Pseudo insert)

Christopher_who
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2 Chs

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Trey_phillips
Trey_phillipsLv4

I can understand a little bit but at this point it's been thousands of years it's getting ridiculous at this point there's no reason he should be this foolish and naive matter of fact this makes me want to reincarnate in this world just so I can kill the MC to vent my irritation

3yr
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Hiro_uzumaki06
Hiro_uzumaki06Lv5

Exactly.

Trey_phillips:I can understand a little bit but at this point it's been thousands of years it's getting ridiculous at this point there's no reason he should be this foolish and naive matter of fact this makes me want to reincarnate in this world just so I can kill the MC to vent my irritation
3yr
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Christopher_who
Christopher_whoAuthor

He spent thousands if uears if straight up walking. like with all other comments i reccomend you skipping the first volume. FYI, im using the time scale of ancient celestial gods. People sit and talk for hundred plus years and nothing happens. Don’t apply a human time scale where a lot can happen in a year.

Trey_phillips:I can understand a little bit but at this point it's been thousands of years it's getting ridiculous at this point there's no reason he should be this foolish and naive matter of fact this makes me want to reincarnate in this world just so I can kill the MC to vent my irritation
3yr
4
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

If you recommend skipping the first volume, you shouldn't have written it.

Christopher_who:He spent thousands if uears if straight up walking. like with all other comments i reccomend you skipping the first volume. FYI, im using the time scale of ancient celestial gods. People sit and talk for hundred plus years and nothing happens. Don’t apply a human time scale where a lot can happen in a year.
3yr
2
Christopher_who
Christopher_whoAuthor

I only reccomend it because so many people can’t seem to stomach it.

Hentai_Senchou:If you recommend skipping the first volume, you shouldn't have written it.
3yr
2
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

If that's the case, I will start your story tonight. One of my favorite stories on this site is a xianxia with actual development from the main character, as he goes from an actual normal person afraid of combat to someone that is forced to kill. It took around 80 chapters if I remember right.

Christopher_who:I only reccomend it because so many people can’t seem to stomach it.
3yr
2
Skepparn
SkepparnLv14

At what chapter do you recommend starting to read, if the first 20 chapters are so bad whyare they still uploaded and if we can skip the first 20 chapters why are they not just a skip-able prologue?

Christopher_who:I only reccomend it because so many people can’t seem to stomach it.
3yr
1
Christopher_who
Christopher_whoAuthor

They’re development for Da Hai as well as background chapters and his beginning persona is something a lot of webnovel users can’t stomach. I don’t want you to skip them cause they’re plot relavent. But if you really can’t stand him then just skip to volume 2. They’re numbered after all.

Skepparn:At what chapter do you recommend starting to read, if the first 20 chapters are so bad whyare they still uploaded and if we can skip the first 20 chapters why are they not just a skip-able prologue?
3yr
2
BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4

True i

2yr
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Johan_Liebert_
Johan_Liebert_Lv2

I would first like to clarify one thing, and that is I don't know much about the chinese mythology and am not particularily interested in the honghuan genre, but still, I kinda like it. I have only read the furst 10 chaps so won't say much. Almost everything is fine but the only problem there is, is that the time skips are too ridiculous like 5,000 years or 10,000 just passing doing nothing really special and also the fact that the MC is exactly the same even after such a long time just dosen't fit well. But a good story, hope the author posts more frequently.

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renato_varela
renato_varelaLv1

I truly enjoy reading novels with xianxia/xuanhuan elements, many people do in fact. Ironically, most people like these stories, because thousands of them feature an uncompromising tyrant as their MC, more often than not they are perverts, childish and petty, a brat basically. I heavily dislike bratty/spoiled people, and therefore any stories with a Chinese setting, with a non-brat MC, is worth a read for me.

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kokimon
kokimonLv4

5 estrellas para el poderosisimo Pangu que abrio el cielo solo para morir despues :( dando asi paso a la era primitiva que donde se encuentra nuestra prrotagonista dios demonio del mar del este Dai Hun. exp

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Professional_hater
Professional_haterLv4

Honestly I’m not good with reviews and stuff since I normally troll😂but this novel is really good yet it has so little views if your wondering if it’ like those young master cliches well it’s not one of those id advice you give it try cuz personally this story is great

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EijiSeishuu
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Tags Please........ .................................................................................................................................

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Janune_Kilua
Janune_KiluaLv4

There is one thing i admire in you which is Honghuang concept in webnovel is so little that you can't even find one. as of now I've only seen yours only in webnovel so i hope you will continue. Thanks for the Experience

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Anbu310
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It's not bad. The MC is a bit too passive but other than that, it's a good read . . . .

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SwordLord55
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Pretty good 😊😊😊 🙏👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼😊🙏😊😊 XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP

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ShadowFlamePhoenix
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Interesting .

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