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literl010
literl010Lv13yr
2022-02-19 05:05

Perhaps my biggest issue is the lack of any descriptions of either settings or people. As a reader, you have no idea what any of the characters look like beyond some of them being simply described as "jade beauty". No hair/eye colour, hairstyle, clothes, places or settings are described, nothing about the architecture, décor, I'm not even 100% sure on what era this is set in or the current level of technology. Additionally, up to chapter 40 at least, there isn't any real sign of an overarching plot, beyond some vague hints in chapter 1. There is some conflict with "young masters", however the face slapping is unsatisfying as the "villains" have no real build up or development. The protagonist is OP but there's no real sign of any intelligence behind his actions and no plotting or planning. I can see why some people might enjoy it, but it's not for me.

Harness Cultivator

Idczhen
4.7
186 Chs

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Idczhen
IdczhenAuthor

Everyone have their own preferences and I don't expect my novel to be able to satisfy every single readers. That is just an impossible thing to happen since no one is built the same. Only thing I can agree with your point is that I do indeed need to work on description.

3yr
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Idczhen
IdczhenAuthor

Lee Tao's here to answer all of your questions and doubts. However, don't expect me to give you everything. And the rating I gave to myself... do I even to explain? I'm Lee Tao, the one and only Harness Cultivator in the universe.

3yr

BrewingFantasies
BrewingFantasiesLv3

[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021] [Reading status: 8 chapters] -.-.-.-.- [Strong points:] - The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre. - You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality. - The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful. - Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7 - A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him. - Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe. - I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1. - The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one. - The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder. - The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers. [Weakness:] - As far as in initial 8 chapters, none! -.-.-.-.- [Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy] [Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]

3yr
wounded_warrior
wounded_warriorLv14

Wohoooo! First Reviewer! Why are you reading my review, go read the novel. I promise it's really interesting. This is coming from someone that does not read cultivation novels. Go! Give it a shot! Read it!!!!

3yr
Voight
VoightLv4

mehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

3yr
steeepppppddaaaddd
steeepppppddaaadddLv4

before you read this author's novels- know that he abandons them in the middle. he stopped luck is a charm novel..........................................

3yr
GiornoGiovanna1994
GiornoGiovanna1994Lv4

Not bad for a story with only 5 chapters. managed to get me perfectly hooked. I don't think i've read a better first 5 chapters in any other books. Keep going Author. Good Luck

3yr
HideousGrain
HideousGrainLv14

This dude is too much of a info dump....sigh but you gotta love it ;D

3yr
Wateristubeg
WateristubegLv12

Honestly speaking, this is a good book. It touched my interest as I, personally, loved reading and watching stories about Cultivation. So believe me when I say give this a shot! If you don't like the story then you can just grill the Author. Don't worry I'll join you :D

3yr
Elyon
ElyonLv15

I like to read cultivation stories, especially those that are light hearted with a touch of comedy. This novel have those things and I am very happy to leave my mark on this novel. May the author continue to do a good job and soar to the skies like a dragon. I look forward in seeing how the MC would become a dragon amongst men.

3yr
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