[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021] [Reading status: 8 chapters] -.-.-.-.- [Strong points:] - The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre. - You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality. - The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful. - Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7 - A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him. - Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe. - I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1. - The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one. - The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder. - The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers. [Weakness:] - As far as in initial 8 chapters, none! -.-.-.-.- [Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy] [Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]
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LIKELol yes, yes. Although spare me all the blunders I did in that book. (Vampire Lord's Demonic Wives) is comparatively better. But yeah, I'll be welcoming the valid suggestions of you've any after reading. You know (cough) authors can't really pin point their own blunders.
DemonWolf_69:Ehhh?? I just put ur incubus novel to my reading list and then i came to check dis and ur the authour of the incubus novel... woah