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Haru_Catty
Haru_CattyLv33yr
2021-10-07 14:47

I read up until almost 10 chapters and I can only tell you guys to read it!! It's so fun! I usually don't read cultivation novels but this one is like an all-in-one. You get to see the author's awesome humor, great plot and world design. So let's take it from the top, Writing Quality : I absolutely enjoy how the text is easy to understand. Every line is carefully written and intrigues me to read more. I didn't notice any errors either. Updates : Updates are great so far. Story Development : The story is great. It shows the problems MC has to face but I like how the MC is witty and playful and gets over his problems, like not being able to cultivate but solving it though.... harnessing xD. Character Design : The MC is funny, quick-witted, not stupid at all and fit for the cultivation set-up. I like his overall personality. Also his kid version is soooo cute. The side characters are so sassy though. Always there to balance things out with the quick-witted MC. Specially the loli girl. World Background : Not complicated to understand. I think the author explained each part in detail. It compliments the story. I really liked the academy setting. Conclusion : If you haven't read this yet then you're missing out.

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Ashton_A
Ashton_ALv12

honestly your review almost made me want to read it but loli girl stopped me in my tracks, never gonna read anything with a loli. Seems good story though.

Haru_Catty
Haru_CattyLv3

Story gewd

Ashton_A:honestly your review almost made me want to read it but loli girl stopped me in my tracks, never gonna read anything with a loli. Seems good story though.
mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15

chapter 47 and let me say you dodged a bullet... I've wasted my life.

Ashton_A:honestly your review almost made me want to read it but loli girl stopped me in my tracks, never gonna read anything with a loli. Seems good story though.
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BrewingFantasies
BrewingFantasiesLv3

[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021] [Reading status: 8 chapters] -.-.-.-.- [Strong points:] - The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre. - You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality. - The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful. - Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7 - A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him. - Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe. - I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1. - The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one. - The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder. - The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers. [Weakness:] - As far as in initial 8 chapters, none! -.-.-.-.- [Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy] [Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]

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