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NulZilch
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The rating on this site is really skewed. Why is this story rating so high? This is just spam. Story looks like it has a goal and it seems author has thought things through, but he stumbles while panning it out. One single plot event has been milked to the extreme. It is refusing to reach a conclusion. Things events characters keep on happening related to it and MC keeps mired into them. What was supposed to be a initial quick profit turned into this gaint kingdom spanning conspiracy and every character that MC meets or even that happens around him revolves around it. There is no world building at all. There are just characters, and info dumps. And info dumps are weird sometimes, characters literally talk A to Z about them even if they are alone. MC meets some secret investigators in jungle who literally talk out aloud eveything they know and their mission. Instead of information slowly revealing itself at every situation every character (including MC) rants out eveything. Every such conversation and monologue is akward, because it isn't natural. No one does that in real life, or in fiction. Characters are kinda there. Hard to feel anything about them when they just give info dumps instead of dialogues.

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Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Grayback

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NulZilch
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Well you are trying to take criticism in good way atleast. Yes i do like Harem stories, but this review and that has nothing to do with each other. I am mostly reading Harem stories here because there's nothing good here on this site aside from some good wish fulfilment fanfics. My review shouldn't have forced you to look into my profile. I don't mind it, but after looking at it you think this story not having harem is problem for me? Where did i even say that? All my review talks about is how akward world building, dailouges and characters are. Might be your first story or whatever, so you need to improve the story flow and how information is given to readers, because right now eveything is info dumps. Best wishes to you for future.

Grayback:Even I was beginning to wonder where are the criticism filled reviews. Things were going too smooth. And that's never a good sign. At least for me, As I'm a cynic myself. I have Getting too many spams lately. Not that I don't like it. I keep the ones with five star ratings coz I like that. lol But in my defense, there are even more +4star reviews that indeed point out a few things that the reviewers didn't like. But they've gone invisible due to them using nsfw words. So I keep these spams as they can compensate for that. And they'll stay this way. Unless a spam gives less than 5 star, in which case it's going to be deleted. No mercy for spammers who give me less than 5 stars. As a writer of antihero stories, I'm no saint myself. So don't expect me to delete the spams that profit me just to keep things clean. As for your criticism, don't think you read past volume 1. And I can understand your plight that things are a lil slow for you. But that's what you get when you don't have the usual troupes going for you. My guess after visiting your profile is that you like harem stories. Which sadly this story is not. Eren is interested in polygamous relationships, yes, but he doesn't like to keep his wives around. And for the most part, he doesn't care or count on them either like most harem MCs do. That's why I didn't include the harem tag. My MC takes time to plan things. He doesn't jump the gun and create one blunder after the other. He doesn't have the shortcuts at his disposal that MCs are usually blessed with. And he doesn't break the ranking records of "geniuses" and become too OP in his pond. The only two things he has are his knowledge about the previous timeline and his demon beast. And he makes use of both of them advantages while keeping his safety in check. That being said, I'm not going to change this part about VEH. Because a lot of readers are counting on this aspect to remain unchanged. If you didn't like the story before volume, don't think you'll like it any further. But there's always a hope that maybe you can change your mind and pick this book again when Eren starts to show some of his OPness. Thanks tor reading VEH till you read it anyway and all the best for your next read. May you find what you're looking for. Good wishes in the end because, even though I have evil inside me, there's still some part of goodness that resides within me. I'm wholesome that way.
Grayback
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Even I was beginning to wonder where are the criticism filled reviews. Things were going too smooth. And that's never a good sign. At least for me, As I'm a cynic myself. I have Getting too many spams lately. Not that I don't like it. I keep the ones with five star ratings coz I like that. lol But in my defense, there are even more +4star reviews that indeed point out a few things that the reviewers didn't like. But they've gone invisible due to them using nsfw words. So I keep these spams as they can compensate for that. And they'll stay this way. Unless a spam gives less than 5 star, in which case it's going to be deleted. No mercy for spammers who give me less than 5 stars. As a writer of antihero stories, I'm no saint myself. So don't expect me to delete the spams that profit me just to keep things clean. As for your criticism, don't think you read past volume 1. And I can understand your plight that things are a lil slow for you. But that's what you get when you don't have the usual troupes going for you. My guess after visiting your profile is that you like harem stories. Which sadly this story is not. Eren is interested in polygamous relationships, yes, but he doesn't like to keep his wives around. And for the most part, he doesn't care or count on them either like most harem MCs do. That's why I didn't include the harem tag. My MC takes time to plan things. He doesn't jump the gun and create one blunder after the other. He doesn't have the shortcuts at his disposal that MCs are usually blessed with. And he doesn't break the ranking records of "geniuses" and become too OP in his pond. The only two things he has are his knowledge about the previous timeline and his demon beast. And he makes use of both of them advantages while keeping his safety in check. That being said, I'm not going to change this part about VEH. Because a lot of readers are counting on this aspect to remain unchanged. If you didn't like the story before volume, don't think you'll like it any further. But there's always a hope that maybe you can change your mind and pick this book again when Eren starts to show some of his OPness. Thanks tor reading VEH till you read it anyway and all the best for your next read. May you find what you're looking for. Good wishes in the end because, even though I have evil inside me, there's still some part of goodness that resides within me. I'm wholesome that way.

Grayback
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my world building and characters r better than most if not the best. info dumps will always be there. there's no good story without it. only no brainer stories will have no info dumps. especially the fanfics that skip on info dumps and world building. coz that's already been done for them. now if you want to talk about how one wraps the info dumps into nice lil nuggets, then of course one can do that. but there are also some readers who like their info dumps in one go without writer creating unnecessary suspence. this being my first contracted story doesn't mean I'm allowed to make mistakes. Neither am I seeing it that way. that's a bad start for a writer. of course I'll look into ur profile as any other writer if they see a review on their books. A review is a rare event than comments after all. I'm just being upfront about it. see, you build a palatte for certain stories over the time as u keep on reading. your taste is just different than what I'm cooking here. and I think we can both agree on that. the reason I visited ur profile is because I wanted to see if you are reading some of some other novels my nov is in competition with. you are not. so my learning curve stops there. anyway. thanks for stopping by. this review will also let other readers know what they can expect from the replies I've given here. cheers!

NulZilch:Well you are trying to take criticism in good way atleast. Yes i do like Harem stories, but this review and that has nothing to do with each other. I am mostly reading Harem stories here because there's nothing good here on this site aside from some good wish fulfilment fanfics. My review shouldn't have forced you to look into my profile. I don't mind it, but after looking at it you think this story not having harem is problem for me? Where did i even say that? All my review talks about is how akward world building, dailouges and characters are. Might be your first story or whatever, so you need to improve the story flow and how information is given to readers, because right now eveything is info dumps. Best wishes to you for future.