The quality of writing and the lack of punctuation simply makes it impossible to read properly (don't tell me it's like that because it's not your first language, it's so bad that I don't doubt you're in elementary school...). The stability of the post is practically negative, the author has practically left this story. From what little I've read, the story developed horribly... with no explanations of necessary things, and lack of details. About the characters, all I can say is that it's bad, without depth or meaning, without the feeling of something human. And the bottom of the world doesn't even fit into something, I can't even describe it... (written in google translator because I don't even know English properly, it's kind of pointless to complain about the writing with me using the translator, but you'll understand if you try to read this story)
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LIKEI tried to read more just to see if it got better, but it was the opposite... it's just bad, boring and pointless (even interacting with people in the paragraph comments was more interesting)
