Really good!! I wish there were more chapters!

amazing , that's all I can say. it has more then 5 characters that aren't brainless which alone is insane for a cultivation story. already love it even though I'm not done with it.

It’s an okay idea. It’s not original since there’s been novels with the same premise as martial spirits or battle souls, but it seems the author decided to use western names despite being in eastern culture. It really isn’t a problem for the normal reader except some cultivation fans. The problem is the grammatical errors. There‘d also some spelling mistakes here and there. Suggest author install grammarly on his device. It would improve the novel. Anyway that all for now, might change my review in the future…

Interesting story the plot is very good, the protagonist's personality is amazing, harem I don't know if there will be a heroine or will appear later on I hope so

This shameless author deleted my review(people commented on it, webnovel didn’t delete it), so I’m gonna make another. Writing Quality-6/10, not really that good but readable. Updating Stability-4/5 Story Development- pretty generic but with a twist, 3.5 but I’ll round up cause you can’t do that on wn Character Development- Pretty bad, 4/10 World Background- meh, 4/5 The Verdict- trash for veterans, great for newbies

Well, I am here to inform others that how short the chapter is.. You just need at most one minute and probably less to finish to read one chapter.. It's the shortest chapter I ever see in any novel.. If you saw 263 chapters, it is actually equal to 80 chapters only.. And it has long been abandoned.. Seeing how short the length of the chapter is, the author probably doesn't have any excitement on writing. He seems to write it to test the water on how far he can go with his imaginary.. And not because he is interesting or anything.. So, once he is bored, he just stops it and ignores everything that happens here.. You can feel it when you read his novel, no enthusiastic at all..

Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potential There's a lot to improve author The grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read it Story development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novels Character design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man. World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future. Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.

Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated

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