Bitty_kush

why do some people know his real name but others don't

you don't hold your breath while shooting you breathe naturally and shoot at the peak of your inhale or exhale

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Such a unique concept

will come back after I get further to see if there are improvements

So far the mc has barely shown a depiction of pride he has been trying lay low until caught and while I like that he isn't one to make stupid decisions off one person saying something him letting people that clearly hate him benefit from him is stupid. The villian tag is blatantly wrong which personally isn't bad if you go in not expecting one. The story development isn't bad but I wish I knew more of what was going on at this point all I know is that he plans to abandon his family so he's not tied into that stuff why no clue from what I've read it seems he would benefit more from staying with them and it's hard to understand his pov if nothing is explained. Also it seems a big part of the story is them dying and starting over but so far I'm not sure if that's gonna happen.....

How is the mc developed i hate when the mc is weak willed just to give room for character development 400 chapters later. He doesn't need to be perfect but he needs to have his own weakness, strengths, morals and stuff that might not be normal.

fun fact ny never built allies that was more common in Chicago. That's why there always trash on the sidewalks on ny

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