Review Detail of Haru_Catty in Dilemma: The Chip System

---> Author's extra note :  Hello beautiful people, I changed my novel's name to 'Dilemma : The chip system' as while I was further writing the story, I felt as if it was better to elaborate the tiny system element this novel contains as well. However, in my mind, it was just tiny XD. But for the story itself, it seems to be a bigger element than I thought. Hence, it was necessary to elaborate it. The system here is really simple though. It's not a worldly system telling you to complete mission rather than the chip aka the personal computer system allowing you to have perks.  No missions XD, Only perks.  I hope my explanation makes sense lol. Since I'm personally not a big fan of system novels, I was in denial this whole time that my story is not related to any of that xD. But it seems to be a little bit related haha. Anyhow, as you guys can already tell, this book is supposed to be a bit of everything. I'm always open to critiques as readers are the best critiques so feel free to pick my errors out hehe. Also, your feedback might change the ending :OO. Just how the feedback changed the name hehe. Happy reading~! I hope I don't disappoint anyone lolololol