Item: I Reincarnated in Lorien Legacies(I am number four.)
Rating: 5
Author: cosmos1

cosmos1Lv122yr

2022-01-08 12:32

This is the first lorien legacies i seen so far so it gets an automatically 5/5 from me. The writing isn't the best. The pacing feels too rushed and the dialogue feels off. The formatting and grammar needs more work. My biggest problem with the fic is that it's telling, instead of showing and because of that it's feels flat. But overall, I enjoyed it

I Reincarnated in Lorien Legacies(I am number four.)

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