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literally waited for a month to stockpile these chapters only to be hit with a crazy cliffhanger 😂

It was a enjoyable read so far but I have some constructive criticism though. It's pretty clear that the author is using AI to assist writing the story, a few signs I picked up on was the constant "It's a new beginning" or "He would his write story" statements at the end of multiple chapters. I honestly don't mind AI especially if it's used to assist with grammar or translations but AI has some serious flaws when it comes to writing stories on its own. Another thing, the use of multiple POVs in one chapter is kinda insane, I get maybe one or two but 4 POVs in one chapter is kinda insane and it's the different POVs rehashing the same thing that makes it distracting and confusing. And the last thing, as a reader I feel like a slower pace and flow might have fitted the story better. With that being said, writing isn't easy so i appreciate the author writing this story and hope to see you continue to improve.

I visited Omaha a few years back and was really surprised by the size of the city i think the metropolitan population is around one million people. Always thought Nebraska was nothing but cornfields before that visit. Cool city, would visit again if i had the chance.

Despite Football being my main sport, I'm a big fan of the NBA and right now the league has some serious issues, feels stale, players don't got that drive in them anymore, and it's hard to watch nba games quite literally its unnecessarily complicated and expensive. I need access Max, ESPN/ABC, Peacock/NBC, NBA League Pass to even be able to watch all the nba games in the US. Unless they fixed this, viewership is going to keep declining unfortunately.

Bro The MC already has the wood wood fruit, why do you feel the need to give him a Sharingan?

Thanks for the chapter but who's Shen Yan? It's seems she popped out of nowhere

This is a easy five for me. The dialogue is natural and flow easily, Mc has a decent and enjoyable personality with his interactions with the characters that feels genuine. Honestly the first 3 chapters was really confusing as i haven't read Lord of Mysteries in a very long time and i still confused about Detective Conan, is the author referencing his other works or something? Cuz it was brought up in the beginning and never mentioned again, maybe it still be important later on in the story I'm not too sure. This is a great story so far, and many thanks to the Translator for taking his time to give us this quality translation

I tried to give this a fair chance but it's truly awful to read. This feel like this was written by AI, barely no dialogue and cohesive logic in this story. Don't bother reading this

Wait he was drafted? like recruited into top science lab for the war effort due to his intelligence or drafted like a common soldier?

It's a completed chinese novel "I Shall Seal the Heavens" man I'm getting nostalgic even mentioning it.