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Damocles - It's so fitting for him to become the living embodiment of the indomitable human spirit. Creativity, Unwavering determination to Survive and Adapt, Perseverance, Courage, Hope, and Damocles has shown he's all of these aspects. I hope he stays human and become an unique entity that power can rival the very Gods who toy with humanity.

The flow and pacing is great, the dialogue between characters feels natural, and the MC character development from a modern guy to an harden spartan is honestly my favorite part of the story. You can really feel the changes the MC is going through as living in sparta beats out everything he once knew in his previous life. The MC is pretty likable, he's just a guy who is trying to survive in a world of Gods and Monsters and knows about the future apocalypse(Kratos) that's about to engulf Greece. Overall this is great story, especially if you're a GOW fan.

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Thank you bro, just for this imma give u a 5 star review later

Lowkey I understand the mc thought process, in night city you can never be too cautious.

Why can't authors be normal for once?

What's the point of even thinking about this, Wonder Woman is a child at the moment.

literally waited for a month to stockpile these chapters only to be hit with a crazy cliffhanger 😂

It was a enjoyable read so far but I have some constructive criticism though. It's pretty clear that the author is using AI to assist writing the story, a few signs I picked up on was the constant "It's a new beginning" or "He would his write story" statements at the end of multiple chapters. I honestly don't mind AI especially if it's used to assist with grammar or translations but AI has some serious flaws when it comes to writing stories on its own. Another thing, the use of multiple POVs in one chapter is kinda insane, I get maybe one or two but 4 POVs in one chapter is kinda insane and it's the different POVs rehashing the same thing that makes it distracting and confusing. And the last thing, as a reader I feel like a slower pace and flow might have fitted the story better. With that being said, writing isn't easy so i appreciate the author writing this story and hope to see you continue to improve.

I visited Omaha a few years back and was really surprised by the size of the city i think the metropolitan population is around one million people. Always thought Nebraska was nothing but cornfields before that visit. Cool city, would visit again if i had the chance.