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Lady_Voss
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2022-06-08 09:12

The story is really good and a new genre for me. BUT, the wording is repeatable at all each chapter. The Author is repeating the same sentence in each chapter, and I found it wasting of time and coin. I like the reverse genre and story line but if the Author did not use the repeatable word or sentences all the time, I might not get bored reading it.

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fairytail72
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I’m sorry for your experience but I as new to writing back then and I learned a lot in this year , please don’t give up and read through maybe you can tell me whether I improved or not, that will ne helpful to me , thank you for your precious suggestions

Lady_Voss
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I always like book/webnovel that can't make me feel bored. I also admire those Author who can brought the story so full of life, interesting and fun to read. I do like your work so much, for me this reverse genre really new to me to read. Please don't take it personally with my comment, I don't want to stop reading it. Hoping along the way, I will not get bored.

fairytail72:I’m sorry for your experience but I as new to writing back then and I learned a lot in this year , please don’t give up and read through maybe you can tell me whether I improved or not, that will ne helpful to me , thank you for your precious suggestions
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