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lauren_mystic
lauren_mysticLv132yr
2022-03-21 01:49

To be completely honest, when I first started to read this novel, I had my eyebrows raised. The punctuation marks and the paragraphs are all over the place, and it's quite hard to understand. Add that to the fact that other than the male and female genders, there's also the mers. And it's a matriarchal society where fewer males are born. I was about to drop the novel since I was looking for a comedic and easy book to read, but I persisted! And it bore fruit. It was a fun read, a story of some face slapping, development and improvement of the FL's character and family. I'm writing this review at chapter 209, where the FL's soul's grandma possessed the body of another villager. Maybe other apocalyptic friends will also possess other villager characters? It's full of surprises, and I'll be waiting for the other chapters in days to come.

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Ayesha_Javed_6233
Ayesha_Javed_6233Lv14

I love it

yue1999
yue1999Lv4

l don't know what to say to this novelπŸ₯²πŸ₯²

Ninny_mai
Ninny_maiLv12

I loveit, wish u write another one like dis...it a very interesting genre one of it kind.it unique😍[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Cris_pan
Cris_panLv3

lol... how do you mean?

yue1999:l don't know what to say to this novelπŸ₯²πŸ₯²
yue1999
yue1999Lv4

𝙸 πš–πšŽπšŠπš— πš• πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πš πš‘πš’ πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš’πš›πš• πšŒπšŠπš— πš™πš›πšŽπšπš—πšŠπšπšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πš–πšŠπš— πš’πš πš’πš'𝚜 πšŠπš‹πš˜ πš•πš’πš”πšŽ πšœπš‘πšŽ πšŠπš— πšŠπš•πš™πš‘πšŠ πšπš’πš›πš• πšŠπš—πš πš‘πšŽπš› πš‘πšžπšœπš‹πšŠπš—πš πš’πšœ πšŠπš— πš˜πš–πšŽπšπšŠ πšπš‘πšŽπš— πš• πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πš‹πšžπš πšπš‘πš’πšœ πš•πš•πš• πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πšœπš˜πš›πš›πš’ πš• πšŒπš˜πš—πšπšžπšœπšŽπšπŸ˜΅ πŸ˜…

Cris_pan:lol... how do you mean?
Cris_pan
Cris_panLv3

I guess you should just give the author a chance and... maybe immerse yourself into the message the author is trying to pass across. β™₯️❀️ If you think about it that way, you might not get to understand a thing, so just have an open mind. it's fiction after all.... πŸ˜πŸ˜‚ BTW, check out mΒ₯ profile πŸ˜‰

yue1999:𝙸 πš–πšŽπšŠπš— πš• πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πš πš‘πš’ πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš’πš›πš• πšŒπšŠπš— πš™πš›πšŽπšπš—πšŠπšπšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πš–πšŠπš— πš’πš πš’πš'𝚜 πšŠπš‹πš˜ πš•πš’πš”πšŽ πšœπš‘πšŽ πšŠπš— πšŠπš•πš™πš‘πšŠ πšπš’πš›πš• πšŠπš—πš πš‘πšŽπš› πš‘πšžπšœπš‹πšŠπš—πš πš’πšœ πšŠπš— πš˜πš–πšŽπšπšŠ πšπš‘πšŽπš— πš• πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πš‹πšžπš πšπš‘πš’πšœ πš•πš•πš• πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πšœπš˜πš›πš›πš’ πš• πšŒπš˜πš—πšπšžπšœπšŽπšπŸ˜΅ πŸ˜…
P_Young_4470
P_Young_4470Lv13

I absolutely hate when a novel doesn't make sense and people are like it's science fiction like that explains and forgives everything I mean for it to be good it has to make a certain amount of sense science fiction or not

geo_graphy01
geo_graphy01Lv13

it's just like how can man make women pregnant like wise in this novel women can impregnated the mers not males. Male ,Female and mers. Mers is like a gender who can get pregnant but they are also males they can't be female This novel is a reverse genre and it's a faction story Faction story means it's imagination so it can be anything it's just author imagination nothing much.

yue1999:𝙸 πš–πšŽπšŠπš— πš• πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πš πš‘πš’ πšπš‘πšŽ πšπš’πš›πš• πšŒπšŠπš— πš™πš›πšŽπšπš—πšŠπšπšŽπš πšπš‘πšŽ πš–πšŠπš— πš’πš πš’πš'𝚜 πšŠπš‹πš˜ πš•πš’πš”πšŽ πšœπš‘πšŽ πšŠπš— πšŠπš•πš™πš‘πšŠ πšπš’πš›πš• πšŠπš—πš πš‘πšŽπš› πš‘πšžπšœπš‹πšŠπš—πš πš’πšœ πšŠπš— πš˜πš–πšŽπšπšŠ πšπš‘πšŽπš— πš• πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πš‹πšžπš πšπš‘πš’πšœ πš•πš•πš• πšπš˜πš—'𝚝 πšžπš—πšπšŽπš›πšœπšπšŠπš—πš πšœπš˜πš›πš›πš’ πš• πšŒπš˜πš—πšπšžπšœπšŽπšπŸ˜΅ πŸ˜…
Quipz
QuipzLv15

You mean Fiction

geo_graphy01:it's just like how can man make women pregnant like wise in this novel women can impregnated the mers not males. Male ,Female and mers. Mers is like a gender who can get pregnant but they are also males they can't be female This novel is a reverse genre and it's a faction story Faction story means it's imagination so it can be anything it's just author imagination nothing much.
Kajal_Jaiswal_8677
Kajal_Jaiswal_8677Lv1

author. . love u this is totally my type story😘

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