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TFHLv62yr
2022-05-27 23:08

well... seems fine. grammar is not good but not terrible. it can be read. also is mc powers from darwin x-men from the comics or the nerfed version of the movie?

My Hero: Quirk Evolution

ZeOwl
3.6
102 Chs

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TFHLv6

also. chapters are extremely short. a normal chapter = 3-5 chapters

2yr
ZeOwlAuthor

;- ; grammar every time man, its understandable I've always had pretty bad language skills. At least you read it...

2yr
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LALMONLv6

Reveal spoiler

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Weet_TIOLv1

Oh, another story about a kind, slowpoke😍 hero who will help people?Thank you for writing this, don't try to write books anymore, it's not yours.

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MaokamiLv14

why does everything have to be a harem, Like come on it's overused at this point and really doesn't add anything. it's everywhere on this site.

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KingAndyLv13

only just started but I hope the author continues to update as the story does have lot of potential, though I would like to see how the mcs quirk develops and if it would be similar to the powers of Darwin from x-men first class

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GaulixLv2

I don’t understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mс

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CountWatermelonTMLv4

Really good base idea for a novel so far so many possibilities for future development so little time........................................

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PrinceOfThisWorldLv1

Horrível, o autor tentou criar uma história trágica pra criar um protagonista Dark, mas é simplesmente ridículo e sem sentido, o protagonista parece um deficiente mental, todo mundo parece um deficiente mental. A ideia do quirk é até interessante, mas todo o desenvolvimento é impossível de ler

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DarkTheLibrarianLv3

My only problem with this story is that Erin and Jess seem WAY to forced. Not to mention Erin is overly psychotic and stalkerish. Jess seems slightly mentally unstable and not in a way that u would normally be for someone in her situation. Also the hero name and Vigi name are both just needlessly bad. Great story and ideas. But it feels like your way too forceful in implementing your OCs. Also Kaite was just thrown in and just NEW everything with little explanation.

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Fer_FurLv4

only at c4 at the moment but its pretty good and has potential.

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earlrenz_hernandezLv3

mc forgive his classmates for burning his family 🤬

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