Half of the story is about the so called books, and it is really annoying, no one will want to read if you continue to do something like that, because whats the point if there is no story to read.
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I'm not trying to hurt anyone feelings but I agree with this guy. personally I tried to read this but I honestly have no idea what the heck is going on. there ton of info dump but there no back story that actually makes sense just forced plot that leads to well...nothing. you have chars from different animals shows and movies fine but then you go out your way to build a mine craft vrish game???? It's like your trying to find originality by mixing every book you ever read in one thing. If the guy deva keep him as one. Have him create his own world. if he like cultivation fine build on that don't be double dipping to different genres to make a story unique right now all you got is mess my friend. I hope you continue writing but just with better plot.
lol anime my spell check is weird
