Jonathon_Hall

Normally i would agree but there is other aspects to it, not the lord of mysteries world, but heavily based off of lord of mysteries

Seriously, his roots is the fist technique, should be the swird one as it was his first technique

Ngl, the story seemed to being going strong in the beginning but once you get past around the 300 chapter checkpoint, it becomes tedious and repetitive, and a extreme amount of filler, and past chapter 500 it gets a little confusing but still able to understand, now once we got to chapter 600+ everything ting seems to be filler and boring to read, and when we got near chapter 700 everything is just confusing and everywhere, it is confusing to try to read and comprehend it, also seems hastily made to the point it doesn’t even sound like a story anymore, this had a lot of potential in the beginning but towards the end it lost all of that potential and more. In the end this story is no longer enjoyable to read after midpoint of the story

That review seemed to be just from a bot it seems

ON CHAPTER 56(somewhere near there) THE CATS WERE LEFT P.S. this is me making the comment before i go to the next chapter

BRUH WHAT ABOUT THE CATS

Seriously

I really enjoy this novel, I’ve been reading it for a long time, I only wish that there could be more updates more often

Agree, I don’t understand why people try to complicate this, also in my opinion when stories use the copper silver gold monetary system they should use the old fashion 100 copper= 1 silver, 100 silver= 1 gold, all they got to do is imply how much a copper coin is worth, like 3-5 copper coins can get you a meal at a tavern or something like that

Other then a bunch of bots in the comments, it probably would have been smarter for the Mc to pick time magic, also reading this and just starting because it appeared on my daily, this is obviously going to be a smut story, I’m kinda getting tired of these type of stories, goodbye