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Ohhh shit he on to us
Maybe the author fixed everything but I don’t see anything wrong in this person writing. The story is actually refreshing
I’m not gonna rate this story bad cuz I only read two chapters but my personal opinion I hate system novels that force the host to it wishes. Makes me feel as if the the Mc is a slave to the system.
I found a treasure as well
Good start but find a way to fix the sentence structure as it’s very messy. Overall good job
I enjoyed binge reading this amazing masterpiece
War is so sad so many lives die on a constant basis
What happened in getting the shadow clone???
Wow this novel is a hidden gem