Review Detail of Pretend in Island Ascension Online

I've been wanting to write a review for this book for a long while, but never got an oppurtunity. As a writer, this is a masterpeice, you encompassed so many great aspects and original ideas in this novel that I don't know where to start, so i'll just explain my ratings for each of these. Writing quality: 5/5 Why: This novel, despite constant uploads, doesnt feel rushed at all, and its quite inspiring to see how good the grammar is, and it looks like it has been reviewed several times over, thanks. Stability of updates: 100000000000/5 Why: I swear to god I don't know how you do this, this is an incredibly fleshed out story with good descriptions and good pacing and you make like *three* goddamn chapters per day. I'm impressed to no levels, and hope you make other novels because you are simply amazing. Story Developement: 4.5/5 Why: I certainly love where the story is going, and every plot point seems interesting and almost thought provoking. The only reason for the 4.5 is due to the fact that there are a few cliques, which i'm not the most fond of, but I still love the story so far. Character Design: 4/5 Why: I love the characters a lot in this story, and they seem quite fleshed out, and likeable. Despite this, however, I have the most to critique in this field. I love the characters, but they are simply, hmm how to say this, *bland*. I don't really mean this in a bad way, and most of this is just personal preference, but yeah really need to include a bit more interactions, descriptions, and just personality. For example, all we know about Kenny, (The best friend of MC) so far, is that he is a *really nice guy* and that he let him in and gained profit for him. Currently we dont really have any "faces" for even the main characters within the game as well. Hell, we dont know what their personalities are, what they look like, etc. We just know they are "useful." I still do quite like the novel despite this though. [img=recommend] World Background: 4/5 Why: I quite like this aspect of the novel, but as this is a review, ill point out some of the flaws I have noticed. So first of all, we know little to nothing about the actual world that he is living in, other than 3 "big" chinese companies, and his buddies buisness. We know litterially nothing else. As for in the game, i'm a lot more forgiving on this aspect, I actually quite like the pacing of revealing the lore of the game. I also love the idea of ranks for the islands. Overall: A solid 4.5/5, I love the plot, although there are certainly some points that could be amplified within the story. Anyway, thanks for reading all, and I hope anyone seeing this reads the book, or at least the first 10 or so chapters, and if you enjoy it, write a review and send a powerstone, it helps the author out a lot! Anyway, cya!