Review Detail of Guiltythree in Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)

Why so short? I'm thinking about reading it but the length seems like an issue

It is the length of a traditional novel. The story came to its conclusion, and I decided to not continue it due to the lack of interest from WN audience. Sadly :]

Also what's your deal with bad coffee? It's in both of your novels on here.

Ha, I didn't even notice it myself :] Great observation.

Guilty, I'm your biggest fan... I have read tens of novels but your work Is the best. Right now I'm completely hook up with Shadow Slave. Please continue your great work!

The author definitely has coffee issues :)

Great story and a fitting end. I would have loved to experience more about Matt's descent into madness. Some part of me hopes for a happier ending for the wraiths, and to read about the aftershock of Zero's actions. A short story but very well developed, and beautifully written. Im glad to have been a part of this journey, thank you for this.

Thank you! :]

Hello , I enoying this novel it ’s great and Shadow slave also great . Can ask someth ing regarding to the novel kinda gullible did Sam and Claire had a deep relation like in physical or they were in initial stages norm ally seeing each others ? Anyway I’m kinda too emerging in the novel when reading so that’s why anyway great novel.

you're the one who worked shadow slave ?? now I have to try it

Hey :] It was physical.

shadow slave has me line,hook and sinker and since l'm waiting for another chapter l'll just get hooked on this one,to the realms with math

Thank you for amazing 6 hrs :]

I have a question about the relationship between ability and descent into madness for wraiths - does it depend from person to person on how many aspects can they hold before their mind breaks and they become insane? also, connected to that, could Matt have lived a very long time if he didn't try to counter Zero`s ability given that he was naturally predispositioned to handle a lot of aspects (it would take him a long time to reach the limit if he just lived a normal life, I assume)

There is a correlation between the number of aspects one can hold in their mind and the onset of the disease, but there are many other factors involved. As for whether or not Matt would have ended up in the same state if he did not fought Zero, sorry, but that is left ambiguous on purpose :] One might argue that he has been experiencing symptoms from the very first chapter of the novel, or that he does not have the disease at all. It is up to your interpretation.

one of my favorites even with how short it is I only checked it out because I'm waiting on shadow slave but I was blown away (: can you write another novel based on this world either the after affects of this rebellion or going back to the days of when the wraith had their own city?

Free Fall was one of the most impactful webnovels I've ever read. Even with the unclear ending it just flowed so well and made so much sense.I didn't think it was possible to shatter that 'perfect image' in my mind so thoroughly with 3 words.Anyway, since the message I made in the discord server got deleted instantly I have a question: does the pyramid have to do with pyramid mentioned recently in SS? Even solely through symbolism? They have some overlapping elements: searching for relief, mindbreak

G3 is so awesome to write ss . I really love that book

I'm on your channel but no one has said a thing don't even know what's happening but I'm there just because of Nephis she held me spellbound author I have questions no for the novel myself ....did you mean it that you really learnt English from... k dramas

Well that was half a joke :] I had a bit of English at school, but mostly I learned it from playing video games, reading books, and watching both TV shows and Kdramas