Okay so I am here for a review. firstly, the start of the story is very well written with an attention grasping style (which i loved it). Secondly, the story is well built with carefully crafted characters, keeping readers engaged and on their toes. This novel has great potential ahead. Keep it up!! keep uploading more chapters, your readers want more.

I really liked the joyful, bright, lighthearted mood the story gave! The first chapter especially gave me a lot of smiles and laughs. I saw some other mention that there are unexpected twsits and although I didn't get to the part yet, I felt the story was rollercoaster of fun. I really did enjoy the character dialouge and interactions, although there are few gramatical errors here and there the writing was well done. Amazing job author! Readers you should defintely give this story a check out!

I really liked the overall story. I believed that this would be something I would like to read on my downtime, when I need a more lighthearted story. The attempts of comedy is pretty good, I found myself chuckling quite a bit. However, I think the descriptions of characters are too much of a exposition as opposed to character details. At times it feels like these short segments puts a pause to the story. Fortunately, these little parts are far apart from each other so it's not distracting. Despite this, I really did enjoy this story and its characters.

Fascinating story with unexpected twists. The title is sweet and doesn’t give anything away. The characters have unique traits which makes it so good, so well thought out and well written. The twists and turns keep the readers on their toes just wanting more of this beautiful romance novel. Great job author.

This has a lot of potential. I read through both your works, at least 10 chapters and the writing quality is really good especially some of the dialogue scenes.

Overall : the story was great, the synopsis was interesting! The story had the potential to be able to soar high! It is also very much recommended to those who would love to see a refreshing and unique story! Writing quality : the writing style was just as same as the other book and it was all fine and greatly unique! The flow/pace of the story was smooth, not too fast nor slow, making it easy for me to grip the understanding of the story better! Updating : the updates are stable and on track! Characters : the characters were described with great descriptions but it was just some bits here and there not too much. It would be good to describe all characters looks, personality and all in the story so we can get to know what they are like and it would do good for visualisation! But the conversation dialogues between the characters were interesting and it makes up for it all so it’s fine!! World background : there wasn’t much background descriptions(?) but there were some descriptions bits, here and there when describing about the things, surrounding and events that were in the story which was good enough to show the authors creativity use of great words! My thoughts : the book was such a great read! I got interested by the synopsis and wanted to know more about the book, the books contents were beyond my expectations and it was awesome! I hope to see more of both your books and wish you all the best! Good job author and keep it up!! ✨😊

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