Item: Marrying My First Love
Rating: 4.8
Author: TonyT

TonyTLv23yr

2021-10-03 01:34

I really liked the overall story. I believed that this would be something I would like to read on my downtime, when I need a more lighthearted story. The attempts of comedy is pretty good, I found myself chuckling quite a bit. However, I think the descriptions of characters are too much of a exposition as opposed to character details. At times it feels like these short segments puts a pause to the story. Fortunately, these little parts are far apart from each other so it's not distracting. Despite this, I really did enjoy this story and its characters.

Marrying My First Love

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