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Review Detail of Bierbart in From Zero to Hero: With the black light Virus

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Bierbart
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Writing quality is rather unformated and thus hard to read. Big negative points for character and story development. black light virus and being against using it fully? rather mentally challenged... even if he apparently uses it later on but still not fully

From Zero to Hero: With the black light Virus

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Aaron_Chong_6689
Aaron_Chong_6689AuthorAaron_Chong_6689

i dont want a 20 chap story, its not easy to write a character with his abilities well, so i had to nerf a bit or in this case, somewhat redo, but please give me a second chance. Life wasn't the nest for me.

Aaron_Chong_6689
Aaron_Chong_6689AuthorAaron_Chong_6689

why not give the story a try now, you might change your mind, who knows

ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4ObamaUchiha

my man. you cant bring your personal life into this story expecting people to care. this story is a complete separate thing. if you changed the story then remake it under a different name or something

Aaron_Chong_6689:i dont want a 20 chap story, its not easy to write a character with his abilities well, so i had to nerf a bit or in this case, somewhat redo, but please give me a second chance. Life wasn't the nest for me.
Aaron_Chong_6689
Aaron_Chong_6689AuthorAaron_Chong_6689

it hasn't nessesarily changed, it's just that people would hate that the mc's has to start back from square 1, my first fanfic is what I wanted to get to million views. creating a second one wouldn't be too fair for said goal. And some people who have dropped it before gave 5 star reviews saying they actually like it more now, and telling others they should give it a chance as well. I think im doing just fine tbh. 2. The comment was to explain why I couldn't upload for so long, which was due to my exams that's it, nothing more. Me redoing the story isn't nessesarily a redo but a revamp, a better paced one.

ObamaUchiha:my man. you cant bring your personal life into this story expecting people to care. this story is a complete separate thing. if you changed the story then remake it under a different name or something