This WAS a good story. the author even warned us that this was an Overpowered fan fic. but then, in the latest chapters, he nerfed him to the ground. literally. the author was gone for a long time and came up with a nerf. I am very disappointed in you, author. It seems you forgot your own story.

if you just started reading this just jump straight to the newest updated chapter author basically scraped all the previous chapter. if you started from chapter 1 and get to the newest chapter you gonna feel disappointed

I must say I'm disappointed. It started off okay mc having to unlock the blacklight okay getting stronger all okay till you nerfed the mc taking away his power. so review Writing quality- Nothing to complain about a mistake here and their but its readable. Stability of updates- Not much to say a good amount for a average author doing this for fun. Story development- They had in the beginning an okay set up sure they don't show much but it was fine and we had an op mc but then out of nowhere because of the bs reason of the R.O.B losing a bet he gets nerfed losing powers and things, This is the worst thing you can do in a story epically one focused on an op mc as not does it kill development if not done properly it makes readers drop as they feel that if the author would nerf the mc once with a bs reason why would they not fall back into bad planning and do it again. Character design- Not the best but its average for a op fanfic story. World Background- This is just not good first they introduce a sky high style school in a dc marvel mix with no canon characters then forget about it then throw us into deskside and dc with marvel only being slightly mentioned in all creating a mess. So in all if you enjoy seeing an authors bad planning and foresight f up an novel by nerfing their op mc with a bs reason (it would be fine if it was a good well developed reason but its not) Then go for it if not stay away.

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is this a harem ..? .

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Excuse my new colleague and reader, but I am the type that cannot lie when asked for my opinion, because I believe that the truth can always favor better development and evolution of ourselves. Unfortunately my review will not be too positive about your work compared to what you did about my work, but I hope it serves as advice and we can talk about it in the future if you want. You look to have a great sense of creation and imagination, good enough to make me want to write something together with you. (End of my message to the author) (My review starts here) I disagree with your comparison between our stories, mainly due to the fact that in another of my evaluations about another fanfic using Prototype was the similar issue that I considered decisive in my personal opinion. Another protagonist gaining the powers of the Blackvirus with the help of a type of system in the story and nothing more about the game, I cannot understand this type of combination that has everything to go wrong. How can you use two powers with limitless potential together? You got lost because of it. Your writing is messy and a bit uneven, although that doesn't affect the story much, I didn't like your protagonist as he appears to be empty and just a random guy, at first I was thinking about reading like a parody(similar a One Punch Man) and was considering the system as the true protagonist of the story, it was funny until I realized it was just the author getting lost in his own work and decided to stop reading. As for the world and the powers, I considered it one of the strong points of your work, I believe that you can try to create something original instead of trying to write more fanfics when you feel more confident. I skipped a few chapters to look more, including also due to the powers of the Blacklight virus, and unfortunately my opinion has not changed, on the contrary, in the end you admitted that you lost control of your story and that was the main reason for your decision to finish without a proper ending. At least you admited and gave your readers your reason about taking this sadly decision, even if some hated you, this is brave and better that just disappearing. (End of my review)

I like this Story I hope the author keeps updating consistently. A I will give my stone's

a work or art its sooo good very good writing good story development very good character desgin updating stability is good and i know when to exept a chapter and a very good world background :)[img=update]