I'm basically bleeding my heart reading this, no offense to you @HolyOniiSan (i know you only uploading this into webnovel). so many misinformation, messed up timelines, but let's just pretend that this is just an AU Naruto Fanfiction. and then, the grammar, well it's not really a problem since I'm not that good either. but the main problem is, even though I already read many xianxia or cultivation novel, i.JUST.can't swallow the raw cringe cliches in this novel, Naruto with Xianxia vibe just not a good match up, AT ALL. the more I read it the more my heart bleed, I keep trying push my heart to read this because many reviews keep saying this is "great novel" and what not, even the reuploader (can I call you that? @HolyOniiSama) said that it will have "godly" arcs later on. But even after 38 chapter i just can't find the charm of this novel, and sadly i have to said goodbye, it's just too much for me. but hey, maybe this is not just my cup of tea. and I will end this review here. oh, and dude, keep uploading, maybe there are many who likes this novel.
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ik it hard it start getting very good only in 150+ chapters, even i dont know what the authors are thinking
it is honestly one of my favourite novels, not sure what you're on about. Also if any author wants to integrate Xianxia elements into a novel, naruto would be one of the best to do it, we have natural energy and its shown that natural energy can be converted into chakra through the use of the god tree (cultivation technique could be a substitute)
what he means by xianxia is that it has all those arrogant young master, old comes after defeating the kids, and 'if one punch doesn't work, I'll use two ' sort of cliches which really seem useless in a ninja world full of deceit and cunning
Venerable_Far:it is honestly one of my favourite novels, not sure what you're on about. Also if any author wants to integrate Xianxia elements into a novel, naruto would be one of the best to do it, we have natural energy and its shown that natural energy can be converted into chakra through the use of the god tree (cultivation technique could be a substitute)
Mistigan_Reaper:what he means by xianxia is that it has all those arrogant young master, old comes after defeating the kids, and 'if one punch doesn't work, I'll use two ' sort of cliches which really seem useless in a ninja world full of deceit and cunning
i didnt see much of that when i read this
Mistigan_Reaper:what he means by xianxia is that it has all those arrogant young master, old comes after defeating the kids, and 'if one punch doesn't work, I'll use two ' sort of cliches which really seem useless in a ninja world full of deceit and cunning
?? By chapter 7 it's already unignorable. I'm honestly about to start skimming. You must have tortured yourself with too many mtl xianxia stories and burned out your sensitivity to it lol
Venerable_Far:i didnt see much of that when i read this
