ill be blunt uhh ill keep reading but you need to change the title, you spent 9 chapters on the story with barely any progression on the actual reason people come to this fanfic in the first place "weapon shop owner" i also noticed he can get points from I guess ill say quest, this immediately ruined an insane amount of things you could have done with the character and the shop but instead you went with the overproduced route that literary almost every single authors goes down. so make a choice man, stick with the shop or allow him to get points from other options. I'm pretty disappointed in the author considering I love shop fanfics cause its pretty rare for people to make them and I like the creativity on how they handle their situation cause most authors just make their fanfics pure combat and it is honestly getting stale. writing quality - 4 stability of updates - 4 story development (so far) - 1 star and by development I mean what the title and synopses says it will be character - 2 world - 3
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LIKEif it changes i might re-review this I can only hope that he stops it before he makes more chapters on it
there's this fic about selling jars with random items inside it wait let me search my library, its called start selling jars from naruto
