author San, remember these words if you don't wanna update the other Naruto fan fiction.................. those who forget about their books are scum, and those that don't update their books are even worse than scum and those who give their books to others to write are even worse scum

ill be blunt uhh ill keep reading but you need to change the title, you spent 9 chapters on the story with barely any progression on the actual reason people come to this fanfic in the first place "weapon shop owner" i also noticed he can get points from I guess ill say quest, this immediately ruined an insane amount of things you could have done with the character and the shop but instead you went with the overproduced route that literary almost every single authors goes down. so make a choice man, stick with the shop or allow him to get points from other options. I'm pretty disappointed in the author considering I love shop fanfics cause its pretty rare for people to make them and I like the creativity on how they handle their situation cause most authors just make their fanfics pure combat and it is honestly getting stale. writing quality - 4 stability of updates - 4 story development (so far) - 1 star and by development I mean what the title and synopses says it will be character - 2 world - 3

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it reads like a Chinese novel (with better English) and the mc acts like a fķn idiot. the premise is good but the execution could be better.

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boring for me. hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello hello

It's alright I guess, it ain't bad but it ain't good either.

does anyone know a story where the mc is a shop/restaurant owner or something?? I really want to read these types of fanfics... I didn't read this fanfic (cause it's dropped )but I liked its idea...