Review Detail of TonyT in Eleanor And The Gods Of Olympus

I found this book quite funny at times with certain scenarios that happen to characters. I find myself either chuckling or taking a deep inhale through my nose at things. Like I really found calling the dude "Hot Sauce" for the first couple of chapters funny. However, since the story is in the first person, it can feel like certain aspects are written as too much in first person, if that makes sense? Like someone else said, it felt like there was too much "I (verb)". Also another problem was the descriptions of the characters, it puts a pause to the story. Instead of a paragraph of pure description that seems out of place to the story, it will be much more smoothly to sprinkle description in the character's actions. Other than that, I did find myself enjoying reading the story. I do think the author has a knack for humor and can execute it successfully.