Review Detail of Hyrum_Gile in My Parasite Skill System
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how should i put this... its not exactly a bad story. compared to others this is way better. im dropping this book because it just seems lacking. the MC is ruthless. he doesn't even try to see if other humans were the same. he just killed them all when they tried helping it. its hard to understand what his objective is. ive read around 20 chapters. i know the author is new to this and all. and i respect his efforts in making a book with a more funny atmosphere. but this book is quite lacking. there isent much detail for the surroundings or the characters so i dont know what to visualize. im truly disappointed. but dont keep my opinion from reading this book! maybe you might see its value. and if you're the author reading this. see this as constructive criticism!
My Parasite Skill System
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I'm the author and don't see this as constructive criticism, no. The MC is basically a baby at first. Just got his 'sense of self' on hand. He's not ruthless. When he kill humans he thinks that's just the way. That's what he's been taught right from the get-go. This is nurture. Well, there's a lot to tell; but with just this point, you can see your opinion is not founded at all. Anyway, thanks for reading the few you read, man. I appreciate it. About the writing quality not being to its top, I must agree with you. Thanks for your review too. I mean what I wrote with respect. To anyone who reads this, you should try and at least read the first book (it's entirely free) in its entirety. You can't see what the story will be like if you don't. Or at the very least the first 35 chapters or so. It's deeper than that above.