A very unique story, and the power system is also an absolute breath of fresh air. It's a good read only problem being that it has far too little chapters
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LIKEHm, that's interesting. I mean, my average word count is 1.22k per chapter. Some chapters are 1k, while some others are 1k5. Surely, you must be talking about the slow pace. In which case, maybe the pace of which the story develops does feel too slow, I don't know. In any case, if that's the case, I've addressed this topic already under the synopsis. Thanks for your review.
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