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IAmALazyIdiot
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2022-06-17 11:12

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Ruler Of Reality

ShadowKatake
4.4
129 Chs

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DaoistMade
DaoistMadeLv15

The storyline is very unique and creative so I really applaud the author for his creative mind but there's still a lot of work to be done to the writing itself. As nice as the character development and plot development is, I realized that there are a lot of redundant elements in the story; especially in chapter one. There was a lot of repetitions of the four girls, a lot of repetitions of descriptions (for example, the blue haired girl with short length blue hair. As you've already said she had blue hair, you didn't need to repeat it) However, apart from those, the writing was beautiful. I love the introduction to the characters and how they each have their varied attributes and behaviours. And I love the construction of your sentences. I just think you could put a bit more descriptions and expand on the personal thoughts of the characters. Wonderful work, please keep it up author!

3yr

HaoShu
HaoShuLv12

Wow, that's a new idea to make schools teach us to wield powers and abilities. And the MC is walking with a watch beside him, it sure sounds a crazy idea. It's like his time manipulation related abilities to me. Author keep up the work and don't stop even if there is less support, just have some patience.[img=recommend]

3yr
MrLollip0p
MrLollip0pLv14

Honest review: I'm rating way higher than it deserves since it's a swap. In short, I'm disappointed. You don't seem to try at all. Creating a novel is more than just sitting in front of a computer and typing whatever flows in. I see you have a book with about 177 chaps but you never bothered to increase your writing skills. Info-dumps, Cringey dialogue, Unrealistic plot, Lack of proper use of grammar (mostly pronouns) and I failed to get the 1st chapter hype to read further. I'm usually more lenient but you're not a newbie to writing. Try to learn more on how to write in English: from proper use of words to sentence structure. I'm not disappointed in your writing but I'm disappointed in the fact that you didn't try to learn anything even after 177 chapters and I can only blame those people who write dishonest reviews. Web novels aren't like traditional novels but it doesn't mean one can write in any manner and expect it to be read. I suggest you start by reading novels like Solo Levelling, or Lord Of The Mysteries and compare it to your writing style and improve yourself. I'm only being honest with you. My review shouldn't be something for you to cry over but something to give you motivation. And with that motivation you've taken the first step to becoming a great writer.

3yr
JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv2

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Ethernal7
Ethernal7Lv4

The writing quality isn't bad outside of some repetitive statements. That's the only good thing about this novel. The world, has very little explanation, the power system, although simple should still be given some basic explanation, the only reason characters do anything is to make MC look good or to move the plot forward. Essentially every character besides MC is female, and probably gonna be a love interest. The MC is the definition of a Mary Sue. Non of the characters act with so much as basic intelligence, and hold little to no motivation. As far as Chinese novels made solely for monetary gain goes, it doesn't get much worse than this.

2yr
Dretno
DretnoLv3

When he said "whatever you mortals call him" it was auto 5star don't add any harem or romance tho..........................................

2yr
Claqiooo
ClaqioooLv4

MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE...MORE. .....................................................

3yr
MettaLord
MettaLordLv3

another good story I must say, I do apologize for my late review however. The possibilities of the mc could be endless but I suppose we will see in the voming future

3yr
jdbeue
jdbeueLv4

The grammar is to be improved. The word choice and the naming are cringe af. But, the overall novel itself has a fine story, and it could be something good

3yr
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