The storyline is very unique and creative so I really applaud the author for his creative mind but there's still a lot of work to be done to the writing itself. As nice as the character development and plot development is, I realized that there are a lot of redundant elements in the story; especially in chapter one. There was a lot of repetitions of the four girls, a lot of repetitions of descriptions (for example, the blue haired girl with short length blue hair. As you've already said she had blue hair, you didn't need to repeat it) However, apart from those, the writing was beautiful. I love the introduction to the characters and how they each have their varied attributes and behaviours. And I love the construction of your sentences. I just think you could put a bit more descriptions and expand on the personal thoughts of the characters. Wonderful work, please keep it up author!

Wow, that's a new idea to make schools teach us to wield powers and abilities. And the MC is walking with a watch beside him, it sure sounds a crazy idea. It's like his time manipulation related abilities to me. Author keep up the work and don't stop even if there is less support, just have some patience.[img=recommend]

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The writing quality isn't bad outside of some repetitive statements. That's the only good thing about this novel. The world, has very little explanation, the power system, although simple should still be given some basic explanation, the only reason characters do anything is to make MC look good or to move the plot forward. Essentially every character besides MC is female, and probably gonna be a love interest. The MC is the definition of a Mary Sue. Non of the characters act with so much as basic intelligence, and hold little to no motivation. As far as Chinese novels made solely for monetary gain goes, it doesn't get much worse than this.

When he said "whatever you mortals call him" it was auto 5star don't add any harem or romance tho..........................................

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another good story I must say, I do apologize for my late review however. The possibilities of the mc could be endless but I suppose we will see in the voming future

The grammar is to be improved. The word choice and the naming are cringe af. But, the overall novel itself has a fine story, and it could be something good