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Started off giving me a warlock of the magus world vibes now harry potter. haha still thanks for the chapter

I really liked the new take on Harry Potter. Esp with the added lordly duties which I havent seen on other fanfics. Though as usual with harems, theres just too much sex chapters. The whole novel with more than 180 chapters is just all about harry potters 4th yr in hogwarts. and you have alot of chapters that are really long. Overall it has alot of potential. its just too bad it seemed to be dropped.

Made this review when i reached chapter 11 so it might be too early. So far, world background has been very detailed. I like the concept very much and i do hope the author keeps pumping out chapters on a regular basis. oh btw, congrats on the new job!

Congrats author on the new job. Thanks for the chapter

Yes dnt worry, its just a preference. ill keep reading on. :)

Personally I dont really like systems with bitc*y personalities and mind reading. Its just too frustrating.

Honestly i was surprised at this fanfic. I was just trying out different GOT fanfics when i stumbled on this one. Kudos to the author. you really did a good job. You tied together pretty much everything in this fanfic in a logical manner. well theres the help from the sith powers but that always comes with a fanfic. Thank you!

Overall i like this fanfiction. We all know how the story of HP goes, so its good that the author decided to change alot of things. You really do have to read through it to find out how it will turn out. Though i was a abit taken aback by the whole different powerful bloodlines culminating in harry. And yes, i do like the fact that harry's partner is not hermione. As im sick with alot of fanfics using hermione as the number 1 female mc.

You will love or hate this novel depending on your preference. For those who like action packed and fast paced novels then this is not for you. As for those who prefer deep and logical world building then this is a gem for you. I honestly am surprised with the amount of details the author put in this novel. As sometimes it became difficult to read due to having alot of explanations. The author really did try to explain magic in a very logical manner. Unlike other novels where you just see magic as is without understanding how it really works in the world building. On another note, this novel did try to do away with the childishness of the whole Harry Potter series and made it more adult like. Like some readers, I would have loved to see the continuation after graduation. All in all, fantastic novel.

Hmm, as far as Ive read, its mostly japanese. So im not sure if you are just generalizing them. Mind you, in novels its usually portrayed that chinese and japanese people dont mix good. If not downright enemies/rivals. When it comes to the plot, true it may have a few cliche scenes but thats normal with a theme like this.