Item: Power Trumps All (COMPLETE)
Rating: 2
Author: Joe_Daniels

Joe_DanielsLv43yr

2021-11-27 18:56

Story has potential and author’s grammar is very readable. However Author has a tendency to flip flop with the direction of the plot. He seems to be unsure about the MC’s personality, his powers, and the direction of the story as a whole. Seems like very little planning was done and the flip flopping was author’s attempts at correcting his mistakes.

Power Trumps All (COMPLETE)

Saintbarbido

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SaintbarbidoAuthor

Thank you for your honest review. I'll try to streamline the plot.

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