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DaoistyQNGiX
DaoistyQNGiXLv143yr
2021-09-09 02:25

Only reason why this story is high rated is because of the spam reviews of 5/5. Story had potential and then out of nowhere the author writes iris and mc breaking up in just a horribly written fashion. Next he gets his powers sealed sne is just flat out weak out of nowhere. Also the author hates any criticism so high chance the author will delete this review. Honestly was decent but became a waste of time. Read the story if you want

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

People break-up all the time, that's normal. Plus Cecile is much hotter in my opinion... and then there's Jesse, Frost... a lot of possible love interests in The Flash. Though I do hate it when MC is nerfed...

Todos_os_Favoritos
Todos_os_FavoritosLv2

if you really hate nerfed protagonists, then you shouldn't watch the CW series about DC. All, literally ALL, characters are incredibly nerfed to suit the plot

_EMI_:People break-up all the time, that's normal. Plus Cecile is much hotter in my opinion... and then there's Jesse, Frost... a lot of possible love interests in The Flash. Though I do hate it when MC is nerfed...
Luiz_Alberto_7131
Luiz_Alberto_7131Lv1

Eu coloquei mais de uma atualização , mas o site deixa fazer isso , não é Spam . Além do mas essa quantidade mínima de 140 letras é muito irritante quando só quero contribuir para uma história que eu adorei

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

Not only DC my friend but MCU as well

Todos_os_Favoritos:if you really hate nerfed protagonists, then you shouldn't watch the CW series about DC. All, literally ALL, characters are incredibly nerfed to suit the plot
Nyxio
NyxioLv11

If you break up because you found someone a lot more beautiful, it shows your character...

_EMI_:People break-up all the time, that's normal. Plus Cecile is much hotter in my opinion... and then there's Jesse, Frost... a lot of possible love interests in The Flash. Though I do hate it when MC is nerfed...
dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

literally everyone love people who are beautiful.we are humans man

Nyxio:If you break up because you found someone a lot more beautiful, it shows your character...
Knived
KnivedLv10

Your chinese is showing

dozkiller07:literally everyone love people who are beautiful.we are humans man
dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

i ain't chinese.but what ever . truth is always hard to digest for many.

Knived:Your chinese is showing
Denzel_theking
Denzel_thekingLv6

your Asian is showing

dozkiller07:i ain't chinese.but what ever . truth is always hard to digest for many.
sudiotaku
sudiotakuLv12

Racist

Knived:Your chinese is showing
Chris_Cauton
Chris_CautonLv2

WTH... I swear to god WEBNOVEL IS GLITCHING! LOOK AT YOUR STAR RATING!

The_Anonymous_User
The_Anonymous_UserLv4

why not make it harem?

nobu_general
nobu_generalLv11

cw?

Todos_os_Favoritos:if you really hate nerfed protagonists, then you shouldn't watch the CW series about DC. All, literally ALL, characters are incredibly nerfed to suit the plot
Jason_blaze_it
Jason_blaze_itLv14

that is true, buts that some shallow advice or logic?... all im going to say, that is shallow af. yes you may say that some people have that thought process, but what the guy is looking for in a novel is much deeper than "oh he op and has all the babes". This the type of novel that I would not read now, maybe when I first started reading novels online in general, this book would keep my attention for sure. After a while it starts to bore you how much there are where the author skips the conversations and just moves on the the power up or how much women an MC has in his harem. Maybe I'll add in some novels that has some in depth feel to it that has some character development. I'll come back for those recommendations.

dozkiller07:literally everyone love people who are beautiful.we are humans man
Jason_blaze_it
Jason_blaze_itLv14

try to read some novels from Cornbringer he does some really good novels. I even have 3 of his novels in my fav list

Jason_blaze_it:that is true, buts that some shallow advice or logic?... all im going to say, that is shallow af. yes you may say that some people have that thought process, but what the guy is looking for in a novel is much deeper than "oh he op and has all the babes". This the type of novel that I would not read now, maybe when I first started reading novels online in general, this book would keep my attention for sure. After a while it starts to bore you how much there are where the author skips the conversations and just moves on the the power up or how much women an MC has in his harem. Maybe I'll add in some novels that has some in depth feel to it that has some character development. I'll come back for those recommendations.
Zenfree
ZenfreeLv13

It shows how much you were into the person you were with before breaking up.

Nyxio:If you break up because you found someone a lot more beautiful, it shows your character...
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