Only reason why this story is high rated is because of the spam reviews of 5/5. Story had potential and then out of nowhere the author writes iris and mc breaking up in just a horribly written fashion. Next he gets his powers sealed sne is just flat out weak out of nowhere. Also the author hates any criticism so high chance the author will delete this review. Honestly was decent but became a waste of time. Read the story if you want

I am a real person writing this review after 28 chapters. Things I Hate About This Story: 1. The MC has no personality development. 2. All most all of the dialogue is between MC and imaginary beings in his mind space. 3. MC has no meaningful personal interactions with Canon Characters. The author implies that there have been, but it all takes place off page. 4. The Author has added the worst kind of annoying loli character, as the being MC interacts with most.

Dude this story is just loud because of bots spamming.

I’m a human

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Story has potential and author’s grammar is very readable. However Author has a tendency to flip flop with the direction of the plot. He seems to be unsure about the MC’s personality, his powers, and the direction of the story as a whole. Seems like very little planning was done and the flip flopping was author’s attempts at correcting his mistakes.

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I loved this fanfic at first and gave several favorable recommendations several days in a row (I thought that was what it was supposed to do, sorry) but it went off on a tangent completely. It doesn't even adequately explore the DC-CW or the MC's personal relationship with the other characters or anything else, besides the Author has almost stopped updating it. Honestly, if this fanfiction continues, it will just be the Author wasting time writing something EXTREMELY poorly done

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