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HEMANG_SEN
HEMANG_SENLv412mth
2023-12-31 13:41

It has several problems if you consider carefully. Naruto telling about his gamer ability to other people is weird I guess. But I sincerely believe the problem is being blown out of proportion here. Narutoverse doesn't have games . They don't know the acceleration it provides to the user(which in case of Han-jee-Han system is too fast to stop). Not that it matters , by the time they would want him captured , he will be too strong to stop. P.S- He is already jonin level. And the chunin exams are still 3 months away. he is a monster already

Naruto : The System Files

Adamo_Amet
4.8
87 Chs

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HEMANG_SEN
HEMANG_SENLv4

A good read overall , a massive improvement to the original for sure , I hope the author doesnt turn Naruto into a chick magnet with kurenai and Anko in the group. Dry not to get reduced to degeneracy , dont have more than 2 or 3 girls with naruto. When the number of fanfics that have been destroyed because of this reason have exceeded the number of fingers you have , you know it has to be avoided at all costs. But , its your story really, you dont have to listen to me. Anyways, till this ff has been consistent. All cool

1yr

Golden_Dragoon
Golden_DragoonLv2

5 stars bcuz I like it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1yr
SHCH7
SHCH7Lv1

Good fic. Interesting to read. But, it seems to be similar to/inspired by another fic of the same name on ff by author 'MaxFic'..... Anyway, I'll continue to read with the hope that this fic will be better than that one.

1yr
Davius_357602
Davius_357602Lv14

Like it make more but make sure to take care of your health to so the story continues to be as good as it is now

1yr
Daoist_Cheesecake
Daoist_CheesecakeLv4

System revealed so dropped. Overall, this novel was good. Not amazing, since it’s a standard system fic but it’s well written with decent grammar and few typos. I won’t go into the many positives and negatives but I’ll say this, never reveal the system in a gamer fic. You will always lose a good percentage of the audience you built. The ones that wanted it revealed would have continued reading anyway, but the readers who do not want it will stop. The negatives always outweigh the positive, from hindering story progression/immersion, forcing character progression/interaction, I can go on and on. Awful decision.

6mth
DaoistcBe0Xk
DaoistcBe0XkLv1

Will he take revenge on Konoha?..............................................................................................................................

1yr
ShatteredMusic
ShatteredMusicLv4

Reveal spoiler

11mth
dragon_heart_3549
dragon_heart_3549Lv13

All stars keep up the goood work ——————-

1yr
Mikey_3214
Mikey_3214Lv4

It’s amazing but the party system is one of the worst themes :( amazing fanfic tho good character development and wolrd development and relationship development 👌🏾

6mth
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