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dao_of_memes
dao_of_memesLv41yr
2023-08-02 23:43

I really liked how you finished a dropped fic with your own ideas

Naruto : The System Files

Adamo_Amet
4.8
87 Chs

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Zercival
ZercivalLv4

A good read overall , a massive improvement to the original for sure , I hope the author doesnt turn Naruto into a chick magnet with kurenai and Anko in the group. Dry not to get reduced to degeneracy , dont have more than 2 or 3 girls with naruto. When the number of fanfics that have been destroyed because of this reason have exceeded the number of fingers you have , you know it has to be avoided at all costs. But , its your story really, you dont have to listen to me. Anyways, till this ff has been consistent. All cool

1yr

Golden_Dragoon
Golden_DragoonLv2

5 stars bcuz I like it.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1yr
SHCH7
SHCH7Lv2

Good fic. Interesting to read. But, it seems to be similar to/inspired by another fic of the same name on ff by author 'MaxFic'..... Anyway, I'll continue to read with the hope that this fic will be better than that one.

2yr
Davius_357602
Davius_357602Lv14

Like it make more but make sure to take care of your health to so the story continues to be as good as it is now

2yr
Daoist_Cheesecake
Daoist_CheesecakeLv4

System revealed so dropped. Overall, this novel was good. Not amazing, since it’s a standard system fic but it’s well written with decent grammar and few typos. I won’t go into the many positives and negatives but I’ll say this, never reveal the system in a gamer fic. You will always lose a good percentage of the audience you built. The ones that wanted it revealed would have continued reading anyway, but the readers who do not want it will stop. The negatives always outweigh the positive, from hindering story progression/immersion, forcing character progression/interaction, I can go on and on. Awful decision.

11mth
Zercival
ZercivalLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
DaoistcBe0Xk
DaoistcBe0XkLv1

Will he take revenge on Konoha?..............................................................................................................................

1yr
Mikey_3214
Mikey_3214Lv4

It’s amazing but the party system is one of the worst themes :( amazing fanfic tho good character development and wolrd development and relationship development 👌🏾

11mth
ShatteredMusic
ShatteredMusicLv10

Reveal spoiler

1yr
dragon_heart_3549
dragon_heart_3549Lv14

All stars keep up the goood work ——————-

1yr
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