Review Detail of pinaka_ in The First Store System
Review detail
Since, I've already uploaded more than 300 chapters, I think, it's time for me to add another review. The Writing Quality is for the readers to decide, so I'll say nothing about it. For the story development, sometime it's slow paced and sometimes it flows normally. Unlike the other store stories, this story starts at the peak of a dimension, so from the get go, the store has been getting strong and known characters. Aakesh, is our MC, who wants to find put about his past, and the system helps him just do that by completing quests. He's a character who has a nonchalant attitude for everyone and everything except his cat, Lily, who is just as chaotic and destructive as a cat. There'll be no romance in the story, so the question of Harem doesn't arise. I update two chapters daily, and for extra chapters, I've announced the goals in the Synopsis. As for the World Background, It's a Multiverse, that is seperated into four dimensions. MC is starting from the weakest dimension. There are countless races like Elves, Dwarves, Orcs, etc. If you still don't like what you read from the review, then go read the book, and if you like what you read from review, then I don't think, I need to tell you what to do.
The First Store System
pinaka_
Liked by 45 people
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Kcorpion:loving it so far currently on Ch 160 looking forward to future chapters I will make a detailed review for this novel soon keep up the good work author
The_Snow_Empress:Well u got me at no romance hehe let's go!!! I hope this is a good one with proper would building .....
everything else is fine but the fact the story is written in a way where every single conflict is stretched unnecessarily when it could just be solved with a single move is so annoying not to mention the repetitiveness, overall this ruined the story for me and the author is pretty scummy too for doing this to just get the story going bc he can't come up with something original or new
