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Shen_Caelyna

Shen_Caelyna

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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
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    For a moment, I thought I finally found a good sign in system story 😖 I liked how the story was going so far but then quality started dropping when he refused to take immediate action to root out the threat causing the emperor to be poisoned—a bad decision since he was tasked to protect 'her' after getting the dead man's legacy .But that's not the worst, I thought we can go back to peacefully cultivating and occasional stalking of evil minions but NOOOOO. Instead we get to the part where he's sowing seeds in every consort in the harem bc the 'emperor' wanted him to. Yes because he's so helpless. oh no. He's got no ther choice but follow through with this plan. And to justify this sudden harem plot, he's also using cultivation technique while doing the deed while remaining but the the females remain unaware. It's also mentioned that he remains 'unaffected' the entire time he's been having sex. Right. Wonderful. Brilliant move author. Great. Not..đŸ˜©Could have been a good story but no, we must always fall in a harem pit before a cultivation novel can make any good progress in its plotđŸ€Ą

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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
    Eastern · swordking
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    just kill them there and then. Afterwards you can go back to the mountain and cultivate .Investigation regarding their deaths would not involve you anyway and they can't accuse the Empress that it was her command. It's so easy but you made it so complicatedđŸ˜©

    "Right now, I can only wait and see."
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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    uh huh. so we'll just selectively forget that he was almost gawking at her three times and that was before he knew that the Emperor was actually the emperor and that 'he' was a 'she' đŸ„ŽI'm actually really enjoying this story so I hope that romance won't come until later. like hundreds of chapters type of later đŸ€­

    Lin Ran didn't take this mind-blowing discovery to heart. He was as calm as usual.
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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    definitely a bi. that's not exactly something you'd pay attention to if you're straight. not to mention in the middle of a fight🧐

    Perhaps it was because the two of them were too close, Lin Ran could smell a faint fragrance coming from the young man. He smelt nice.
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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    this is the 3rd time. the first one was when he was awarded as the champion, the second time with Daoist Li, and then now. Why. Why on earth do you keep staring at people😒

    Looking at the young man with his eyes closed, Lin Ran felt that the young man had delicate facial features. For a moment, he was so engrossed looking at him that he did not even notice it when the young man opened his eyes.
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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    for someone who has a lower cultivation than Lin Ran, this old man is very powerful to be able to fully unleash the power of this sword technique. impressive

    As if to prove a point, gigantic fireballs exploded in the sky, and sparks flew everywhere. Countless fire meteors fell, and the heat they caused could melt a person almost instantly.
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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    oh! I forgot he was blind. but since it's mentioned that he witnessed what happened in the garden, what happened to the "a pair of eyes" that was secretly observing mentioned in the previous chapter?đŸ€”

    Even if he was blind, he was by no means a fool. After observing Lin Ran for a year and seeing the interaction between Lin Ran and Zhou Hao, Daoist Li had a high regard for him.
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    Signing In At Mount Sword For 100 Years To Become Invincible
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    This. Teaching would be more effective if there's a demonstration. Something he can't do since he's unable to cast spells yet and he's a total newbie 😒

    "Formula 1 spells require 1 magic circle before they could be casted, and this pattern continues until formula 10 magic spells. Memorizing the magic formula of a spell might be easier but as a student of the Heavenly Magic Academy, you're bound to be different from the rest."
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    My System Academy
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    I find it unbelievable that he can explain these theories considering the fact that he's been in this world for only a few days. It hasn't even been a month. And he wasn't given a cheat where he could comprehend any magical theories in an instant. Unlike the task of saving Emi's sister where he became powerful in an instant .I don't see how he can become an effective teacher? are you saying that just by reading a few days, he can already be proficient that he can teach students who have lived in this world for many years? I don't think so.

    "Since we want a fireball to appear in our hands, we must utilize our minds to imagine how flames work, how to make it appear as a ball, and make it float in our hands. Then, we gather the mana from our magic root and circulate it in a way that the fireball would then be produced."
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    My System Academy
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Replied to Shen_Caelyna

    *a breath* why can't we edit comments đŸ˜€

    If Aakesh knew Maria's thoughts, he would only respond, "Not worth my time."
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    that's right

    It's true when people say, 'Love turns even the sharpest person into stupidest.
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    The First Store System
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    what feelings are you even talking about!!! it's barely even a day since you met him!!! my disappointment right now is on the same level as Elsa

    Maria decided not to hide anymore. Her family had already died due to her. She can't let anything happen to Aakesh due to her. It's better for her to act as a slave rather than see another death. She also believed that he would never reciprocate her feelings due to her past, so why not sacrifice herself.
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    The First Store System
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    girl, do better. make some money, but those healing pills and torture that rapist and murderer before ending his life. after that, you can think about romance

    With every step she took, the differences between Aakesh and her emerged in her mind. "How can a girl like me expect someone powerful like the store owner to like me?" This thought surfaced in her mind and deepened as she took forward steps.
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    girl, I'm disappointed in you. you literally just had an encounter with your worst nightmare a few minutes ago and you were so angry that you half mutilated yourself. This man assaulted you and murdered your family but now here you are simping over a man with blue skin you met not even 24 hrs ago. are you for real, right now?

    A sour expression appeared on Maria's face after Aakesh's spoke. She wanted to stay for some more time and look at him laughing once more. She became obsessed with his laughing face after seeing it only once. She even forgot about the three more pills she needed to buy to heal her dantian.
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    The First Store System
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    is the store alive?? was that actually the system? or is there another entity that has been accompanying him without his knowledge? ooooohhh I am stoked 😆

    The next moment, both he and Lily disappeared from the store. Immediately after Aakesh left the store, a sigh echoed in the store.
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    The First Store System
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    He's the only one feeling awkward. The system doesn't have any emotion😕

    Ch 12 Creation
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    I forgot about that. So how did he pee in the past years? or this race don't need to excrete waste?

    Twenty years have passed since then, George has entirely changed. He has grown to ten times the size of his past. The number of horns on his head has grown to sixteen. He was now a royal Infernal and had control over one enormous galaxy with a size of more than a million Light-year. His penis also has returned because only royal infernals had the capability to reproduce.
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Commented

    Aakesh did say that the customers would earn more than what they paid for. Although in George's current state, paying his debt is still a huge task

    The memory contained the complete knowledge of reaching Level 11 hellfire mage. "Only a supercluster core for this knowledge," He murmured, as the price he thought to be expensive turned out to be dirt compared to the product.
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    The First Store System
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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Replied to pinaka_

    thanks for this comment author. I'm looking for a good read after I just came out of a pedophilic garbage bin I unexpectedly fell in. đŸ˜«

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  • Shen_Caelyna
    Shen_Caelyna9mth
    Posted

    This is the lowest rating I've ever rated any book ever. Simply because it's almost advertising pedophilia. At the beginning I only had issues with the author using "everyone" in almost every sentence when interacting with the audience. But there were comments on the screen that made jokes about hooking up with minors. Okay it's a joke I'll take it. BUT the fact that he, who had the body of an 8 YEAR OLD child was attractive to a FULL GROWN WOMAN is just messed up! He gave her his jacket to prevent her from getting cold and that made her fall for him?!!! WTF?!! I understand he's a grown man in an child's body but that's not enough reason to whitewash pedophilic tendencies. Disgusting đŸ€ź And mind you it's not just ONE WOMAN. THERE ARE 3 OF THEM. And as if to whitewash this utter bullshit, the author then decided to give him a growth potion that would transform him into an adult as a legitimate excuse and basically a legal pass to have sexual relations with 3 adult women. He impregnated 3 of them after informing them who he was and that he had a system .Overall, a total disappointment and truly garbage of a story .

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    Are You Telling An Eight-Year-Old To Survive In The Wilderness?
    Urban · Remove the Head and Eat
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