These gotta be fake reviews man, grammar=trash, character development= trash, to get reincarnated he “saved” a homeless women from getting ra*ed dies there and the women plus child are there left with the guy who murdered him but instead of anything bad happening the child goes on to be a billionaire and saves everyone in the world. he gets a system and the starter pack made him a god

I think this story has potential however the grammatical errors make it hard to follow along and there are several plot points that i would change. also the story feels abit to fast pace even tho it doesn’t seem like its intended

The plot armor is on divine levels with this one. System points are always there a plenty, and your eyes will hurt from rolling them too much. The concept of the story isn't bad. It's rather interesting but it's the execution there of that did not go well. The dialogues are highly unrealistic and remind me of Sheldon in the big bang theory more often than not. Events that occur are even more unlikely. The character has absolutely no skill at resource management yet despite mere paragraphs earlier barely able to purchase something will suddenly be able to spend hundreds of thousands a few paragraphs later with thrice as much spare afterwards when nothing occurred to increase said valuta. The story is full of such things. Things like building a base that's finished in a day then leaving. 'Random' summons being the heroes of an entire franchise, and that's not even speaking about the 'Romantic' inclinations. Read it at your own risk...

I think this has a lot of potential. If the system could have a few more different technologies, it would bring it to a whole new level. I.E halo, titanfall etc.

The story is rushed. The charcters arent described. I dont know how the character or important female character look like after reading 4 chapters. The autor generally doesnt describes important things. For example he lets his soldiers mine some ore and crystal on tatooine without introducing the materials. There is an inconsistency in the numbers. His system points jump between one and one hundred million. His dialogue is very forced. The idea is good, but the story needs a clear plan and this story doesnt have this plan.

The guy gets a system, I don't think anything else needs to be said TBH... But I'll go on anyway, the system gives him gear (including a lightsaber) and access to ALL force abilities from the start. So there is no initial struggle for anything making it boring from the start. The system can summon what are essentially slaves for him that are loyal etc... So the MC doesn't have to be written with good social skills and doesn't need to have good qualities as his people will follow him anyway which will take any tension at all out of his future choices. If he wants something he just buys it from the system since it can sell him anything so the MC always gets what they need when they need it (another thing making it boring). There are other things but I don't think it's really necessary to mention them.

In my opinion the story feel rush by that just my opinion the character design is great but if you will please explain some of the back story of some of the character and character design is great my opinion take your time to describe the scene and the place.

I read the first chapter and got to the second chapter, until the goddess mentioned that he would get a system and give him anything he wants. Really thought it would be a decent Star wars ff, but sadly not, sigh......

latest chapter ruined the whole story. the new enemy chapter sees a random OC pop up for the first time, kill the Jedi council, brainwash mace, then kill Palpatine. this all in one chapter. No back story, no build up, just comes out of left field. horrible. Ruins the whole story in my opinion.

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