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kurt_hunter
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2021-08-24 02:13

I think this has a lot of potential. If the system could have a few more different technologies, it would bring it to a whole new level. I.E halo, titanfall etc.

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Dr_Dred
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I was thinking of introducing new technology from other things so it might come ima just have to find a way to integrate as its already a couple chapters in

kurt_hunter
kurt_hunterLv1

Thank you

mila_islam
mila_islamLv13

the grammer it hurts

kurt_hunter
kurt_hunterLv1

Keep up the good work it's getting interesting.

SAWOEN
SAWOENLv11

There's a story called the fourth scourge its a good book but it's from a mtl so it's not as fun as a translated work it has like techs from starcraft protoss terran and homeland etc but I gonna give your book a go if it's good I'm gonna give u a review 😄

Dr_Dred:I was thinking of introducing new technology from other things so it might come ima just have to find a way to integrate as its already a couple chapters in
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