Review Detail of Daijena in I got isekai'd as a Yuki onna
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So first of, the title and novel pic seem to have nothing to do with the actual story. Instead of a Yuki onna, so snow woman, who are exclussive female, can control ice, snow and cold. Who are cold to the touch and can freeze someone solid by breathing on them. We get a generic dude with ice powers....yeah. The writing quality is rather good and enjoyable to read. Now for Character development, I only read till chapter 5 yet, just to warn some people that it can get better, but currently the mc is a bloody fool, a pushover that died twice and still half as*es everything. And becomes a servant cause plot, he doesn't even question it, in fact he questions nothing, he knows he has demonic powers but doesn't ask how to use it or train it. Update rate is so far ok and World Background, it's a fanfic, they use already established Worlds so...yeah
I got isekai'd as a Yuki onna
FallenSnow64
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The title is an irony the mc makes about himself, thus I left it there as a joke. Your characterization of the mc and the story is almost spot on, but the fact that he doesn't question anything sticks out when he wouldn't have all that conflict with Rias if he didn't question stuff. That aside, thanks for sharing your opinion on the story, much appreciated :)
Yeah, I mean your writing style is honestly really good for this site standarts, like top 10% , just the character and plot so far are a bit illogical to me. Will try to keep the bit*hing to a minimum.
FallenSnow64:The title is an irony the mc makes about himself, thus I left it there as a joke. Your characterization of the mc and the story is almost spot on, but the fact that he doesn't question anything sticks out when he wouldn't have all that conflict with Rias if he didn't question stuff. That aside, thanks for sharing your opinion on the story, much appreciated :)
FallenSnow64:The title is an irony the mc makes about himself, thus I left it there as a joke. Your characterization of the mc and the story is almost spot on, but the fact that he doesn't question anything sticks out when he wouldn't have all that conflict with Rias if he didn't question stuff. That aside, thanks for sharing your opinion on the story, much appreciated :)
Daijena:Yeah, I mean your writing style is honestly really good for this site standarts, like top 10% , just the character and plot so far are a bit illogical to me. Will try to keep the bit*hing to a minimum.
Welcome back after a year, I'd like to say that I am happy to continue, but I am still looking for female mc's, can't really put myself in the footsteps of guys
FallenSnow64:Ngl, that's the point.