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Having a gf at that age is so ordinary that most readers can't relate~
The title is an irony the mc makes about himself, thus I left it there as a joke. Your characterization of the mc and the story is almost spot on, but the fact that he doesn't question anything sticks out when he wouldn't have all that conflict with Rias if he didn't question stuff. That aside, thanks for sharing your opinion on the story, much appreciated :)
The only flaw in this idea is that it would involve her knowing that he's a devil :)
You're not expecting him to grow stronger after just 3 chapters when he started at rock bottom, right? He is going to have development, the alternative was making him overpowered right from the bat which would have left more plot holes than you think will be in this story the way it's written now.
I will be back with a more detailed review as more chapters are published but so far the premise looks promising. I didn't know how I'm supposed to rate the story development (after 3 chapters) and I thought the writing quality in the latest chapter was kinda rocky compared to the other two but otherwise it's a good read, I'm waiting for more.